So nervous for Mayli! I wonder if Obi-Wan can sense her fear in the Force?

I need to work... but I can’t stop reading!

That final line killed me! "There is another." I feel like that was a perfect way to end. Such a great story- I enjoyed immensely getting to check up on Kell and Sky in this epilogue as well. Good to see everything was going well with them, and that they were flourishing outside of their previous isolation. I nearly cried over Yoda- whose exile I, admittedly, never thought much on, but suddenly the loneliness and tragedy of it was thrown in sharp relief for me- and for him to so briefly be able to speak to Obi-Wan was so touching. But baby Zella! Oh- everything about her storyline was so sweet, and I especially loved the reasoning behind her name. Watching the rebellion grow at the same time was both nerve-wracking and thrilling. I cannot wait to see how Mayli and now Zella continue to change Obi-Wan's life and next the plot of Episode IV!

Wonderful job! Thanks for such a great story. Can't wait for the final chapter. :)

Love the happy endings with the Jetts and the Kenobis. May the Force be you and yours. See you at the next story!

LOVE this series !

I have enjoyed this story so much. I will have to check out your story about Jak. I am also very much enjoying Another Galaxy.
This story seems well thought out but fresh at the same time. I love some of the quirks, such as Obi-Wan as a bartender. Also, a lot of good suspense. Thank you!

Wow, little Zella is one strong force sensitive little angel. Too bad the end of this story is here. This is a wonderful story and I can't wait to read the third and final portion. As you so gracefully say "May the force be with you".

Bravo! Well done. Glad it had a happy ending. Obi-Wan deserves some happiness. Glad for Mayline that Zella finally came out! Looking forward to Jac's mis (?) adventures and Tatooine Sunsets.

Okay. You made me tear up in this last chapter with the final scene between Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon. Now I'm starting to think Obi-Wa's daughter is surprised to see him because he's a Force Ghost. Well, I will just have to wait for the mystery. Thanks for a great story!

Now Obi-Wan feels the loss of Qui-Gon. It's nice to meet little Zella Rey Kenobi. That's one heck of a name.I guessin Obi-Wan is in deep protection mode. God help any guy caught messin with his little angel Zella. Great job as usual and may the force be with you as well.

Oh, great chapter! What a close call with Vader! I'm glad she got Kell and his son away safely and got home to Obi safely. Whew! A lot of suspense!

Whew! That was close! I'm glad Mayli and Kell were able to summon the strength to keep it together. Darth Vader was very chilling.

Wow, what a scary moment. Thank goodness for the rebellion. Vader is a vile smelling piece of crap, as is the Emperor. Also thank goodness for Kell, he turned into a good Obi-Wan said she's not leaving again anytime soon. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.

This cliffhanger sent shivers down my spine. Great one!

Oh no! She was so close to getting away! Great suspense and angst! Poor Obi-Wan!