Me gusto bastante. Pero el final fue algo flojo, no vimos apenas el apareamiento ni lemons.
Eso lo eche en falta la verdad.

The formatting of this chapter has really really glitched... it has the html and fonts and all kinds of things in between messing up your story. Just wanted to let you know!

La volví a leer un historia muy buena.
Solo que es un seshome y los dejaste aparte mucho tiempo.
Mientras todos prosperaban y tenían amor y hijos contaste muy poco de la pareja principal y me dio rabia.
Un vez llego lo bueno lo sinplificaste demasiado.
El lemon fue pobre y a penas nos contaste de su vida después.
Por lo demás me gusto mucho.

you should have put a lemon here at the end kinda antclimatic here.

Love this awesome work can't wait to see what you dish out next _

Damn this is hella good! Finally, a story that leaves you satisfied, thank you for the great work!
I hope you’ll write another masterpiece in the near future xoxo

Yay! So glad I found this! I really liked it!

Precioso de veras. Final feliz. Sin demasiado drama y triángulos amorosos o cuernos. Perfecto.

it was great , love Sesshoumaru and kagome pairings!

Loved it thank you!

This is an amazing story! I really really liked it!

This was such a good read. Loved the plot and how all the loose ends were tied up in the end.

What a good story! I read it right through, every chance I had to pick it up and read even a line!
Towards the last chapters, I was so happy to read your explanation of Raya and Nuriel's meeting Kaede. It made the comments about their knowing each other and Raya's about being married nearly 150 years make so much more sense.

As to your question on these story themes (which you've already seemed to have started #3, but I'll answer for fun):
1. Alice and Wonderland
2. Fairytales - each chapter(s) a different one
3. Sesshoumaru of future and Kagome, Lord (Lady?) in the past.

I actually feel that is my order of preference lol, done well (like your story here,) a wonderland tale could be quite fun.
Number two though feels like it would be a lot of multi-chapter works, interspersed with some single chapter ones lol. Some of those fairytales write out quite long, whole stories of their own, without adding more romance or so many characters or just in fleshing them out properly. And that's besides the trending habit on this site of just copying the Disney movie verbatim (I don't mind people taking heavy cues, but it does seem odd to basically read the script with just names/looks changing lol), but I'm not thinking that you'll have that problem since you expect to fit many tales in one story frame work :D.

Thank you for sharing!

This was a very well done fic. I enjoyed reading it into the late hours of the night and I am always a sucker for happy endings for everyone.

This story was great. It’s 1:14am where I am and I have to be up at 6:30am but I had to finish this story! Would love to read a story where Sesshoumaru is from the future and Kagome is a lord(lady?)