| Reviews for Return of The Betrayed Champion |
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   Yaw613 chapter 9 . 6/19/2019 Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. |
| ASH chapter 1 . 12/28/2018 BTW FK U |
| jai jaiswal chapter 9 . 9/5/2018 Hey! You did not a updated the story for more than a year |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/8/2018 ARE YOU MOVING THE STORY! NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/15/2018 Mind Blown to bits |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/21/2017 Will he get his Pokemon back? |
| Miele Hayden chapter 9 . 4/26/2017 Can Dawn get Kyurem on her team or better yet Palkia and Dialga ? Sincerely Miele Hayden |
| Rarity chapter 9 . 4/26/2017 Darling, care to NOT MAKE ANABEL ASH'S WIFE ! And make Dawn his wife instead for it will become a love triangle and rare is not into triangles. Love you soo much darling*kisses you on the lips leaving a red lipstick mark on your lips* well I know other ways too make you change your mind*winks* |
| CommanderAwesome3 chapter 9 . 3/6/2017 Nice chapter! It's been a good amount of time since you updated, any occasion? I'm going to bet rayquaza will be ash pokemkn as you mentioned a shiny rayquaza at one point, and I feel rayquaza is underused. Hope to see the next update soon! |
| terminalvelocity chapter 5 . 1/19/2017 mind if i use the O-Ball in my fanfics. I've been trying to find a plot device with a high enough power level and this one takes the cake! |
| Make FFN Sensible Again chapter 7 . 1/17/2017 So I take it that Dawn is Manaphy's mama now? I'm guessing she is. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/17/2017 Holy cow guy, welcome back and boy did you return with a vengeance. Glad the ideas i gave you worked out for you. I sent you a PM, dont know if you got it though. Keep up the good work, hope May gets more karma later. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/16/2017 Mission. Recover some of ash pokemon |
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/14/2017 Please update |
| Pearl shipper chapter 9 . 1/14/2017 I think ash dawn and Brock should have the three legendary trio I'm speaking of mesprit eself and uxie and just out of curiosity will dawn and ash end up together I hope team rocket and Ash's other enemies who want him gone I hope there plans back fire on them bad and also ash gets the proof he needs that he is innocent and it wasn't him who killed his mother so they would stop pursuing ash and go after the real culprits who framed ash |
