| Reviews for Jaded |
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   Estelle Lumene chapter 2 . 7/12/2017 They both are rather prideful and strong-willed, eh? I wonder how does Lorna fit into Maximoff household? Oh Wanda, I bet she takes after her parents in being stubborn and vengeful, unlike peter who is so sensitive and forgiving. I loved the bit with his mind working at super speed. |
| Estelle Lumene chapter 1 . 7/12/2017 You who could outrun a hurricane; did you ever have a friend? - that's so beautiful. A perfect description of Peter. |
| Awdorkable Turtle Epidemic chapter 2 . 6/16/2017 i was going to wait until I finish the whole series but honestly this is work is to brilliant that I had to stop to comment on it. The writing is so well put together from Erik's mannerisms to the whole incident to the way Peter handles everything is just so well thought out, especially when Magda was involved. Your characterization of them is so spectacular, and I loved thr entire interaction to bits (You write Erik so well and the look into Peter's thought process was wonderful) this is my favorite one in the series so far (the bonding at the fair takes second place, plus I think theres still a few more in the series) Thank you for this, i loved it so much |
| someone chapter 2 . 4/4/2017 Vut!? i thought there were more chapters AHHHH UPDATE I LOVE THIS PLS UPDATE SOON! :) |
| Nvrmore chapter 1 . 12/12/2016 Oh, the feels! I like that you touched on this. I haven't read any other stories that have dealt with the aftermath. Nicely done. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/29/2016 I love this series so much. Erik is an awesome papa bear. Please write more! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/29/2016 Your writing style is flawless and amazing! |
| ebonypol chapter 2 . 6/30/2016 loving this protection series! :D |
| The-Red-Lip chapter 2 . 6/30/2016 Great job with this fic! |
| caro chapter 2 . 6/27/2016 Wow, another magnificent installment! This might be my fave so far; I'm a sucker for Peter getting hurt and his dad coming to the rescue. In particular, this bit: "They would rue the day they harmed Magneto's son. Every human from this day forth would honor the silver prince." Gave me chills, honestly. Beautifully written as ever. I love your interpretation of Magda as well and can't wait to see more. Thanks for sharing! |
| Fangirl1022 chapter 1 . 6/26/2016 Been following your Protection series and loving it. I hope you make more soon. I just love Quicksilver... And you are certainly doing a great job at the fanfic! Xoxo.. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2016 This is so heartbreaking and beautiful. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/25/2016 Erik and the Maximoffs are breaking my heart. Does this mean there are more children? Erik will just die! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2016 This chapter is so sad, I'm about to cry. Amazing job well done! |
| gracedreamcloud chapter 2 . 6/26/2016 HOLY SHNIZTEL! Your writing style is amazing and I'm in love with your stories! Amazing job! |
