| Reviews for Upperclassman Character Trope |
|---|
FAN of Fiction chapter 1 . 6/24/2016 I really like your story, it was hilarious! And the song puns were great, too! |
Azhenet chapter 1 . 6/24/2016 good fic, a luka one-chan xd, and poor IA, she is called mini luka lol , thanks for write this |
TremendouslyMental chapter 1 . 6/24/2016 ...I found nine after reading this twice: once for fun, and the second time purposely searching for references. But two are from the same song... Am I even doing this right? I dunno... meh. I'd like to list them, but then thats sad on anyone who wants to find them themselves, and are reading the reviews for fun... Ah, well. Flip it. Imma put it all into one massive paragraph so if someone wants to see what I've got they can read it. For the obvious ones, I noticed Interviewer and Six Trillion Years and an Overnight Story (that IA one forgive me I've never heard it only seen the thing in my recommend) and Drop Pop Candy. I was wondering if there'd be a little Jekyll and Hyde reference in there, with Luka wondering about if Miku and Ia were dating and stuff, but I didn't notice it (if there was one...) and then I remembered about your other story, so I didn't think there'd be one there. The Rondo of the Sun and Moon one was easy to spot, too. I thought the stray cats and lamp posts were familliar from somewhere, and then I remebered Kagerou Daze. Of course, a Negitoro fanfic is not a Negitoro fanfic without a reference to magnet, and that one was easy to spot (near the end, nice thinking man) and the Bacterial Contamination one was there too when she was on about what she learnt. The two I'm not sure about are when "jumbled syllables would roll out" and when the "thoughts spun about in her head until the turmoil was too much to bear" (soz if that quote isn't exact), which both seem to be from Rolling Girl... but I'm not too sure. Meh, I don't listen to the widest variety of Vocaloid songs, so I could be wrong, but... eh. I hope I've got them :D Oh yeah, and I don't watch anime, so that reference was lost on me. Though, there were bits that I felt like could've been a reference, but I could match it to anything. Ah well XD The story itself (gosh I went on for long about the references): awwwww it was so cute. Luka does seem the type to fit into the role of a big-sister-type senpai-type person. Miku in this is a good person, though seemingly dim-witted at times (don't be a creeper and say you wanna talk to her sister and not her next time, Miku), but she's got all good intentions, so I like her. Ia, the snake, feigning an illness so Miku and Luka and talk (did I understand that right?)... Or was Miku in on that too? Flip, I'll need to go back and reread (then reread again, and again, and again...) in a bit. And yeah, Luka always suffers! Mate, next fanfic, yeah, Miku suffers (pwease). And then Luka will get to experience the other side for once :D Oops. This is too long. I'll shut up now. Thanks for writing this! |
chi2lyn chapter 1 . 6/24/2016 DROP POP CANDY REFERENCEEEEEEEEEE. AND INTERVIEWER REFERENCEEEE. SUN AND MOON RONDO REFERENCEEEEEEEEEE. so like, I was doing this review as I read, and every references that I found, I put it here. in the review box. so i reread it! because I love searching for puns. I love puns but I fucking suck at it. *crie anyway, what I found is: six trillion... IA's "a tale of six trillion years and one night" grrrr IM STARTING TO GET DESPERATE. UHHHHH when luka thought of summer with miku it reminds me of len's fire flower "firework". OMFG OF COURSE NOT AAAAAAAAA THIS IS DRIVING ME NUTZ. and winter...reminded me of soundless voice...sad song...SO OBVIOUSLY ITS NOT THAT. AAAAAAAAAAAA bacterial... "bacteria contamination blablabla" i forgot after that lolz. i never watched oregairu...yeah im a pussy who cant stand trap such a pussy. anyway, the senpai thingy...reminds me of a honeywork song but im sure im mistaken but hey at least i tried, teehegag* anyway, its sad that my vocaloid song knowledge still oh so limited but yeah...i tried... crie my soundtrack are filled with tohma, hachiouji, 39 deco, suzumu, mitchie m, and neru...and last note...and jin(kagerou projeeecttttttt)...so many rocks but i cant still rock a good pun...yeah that was an attempt but lets just pretend that pun never happened. ANYWAY love your writing. its carefree and...ironically... shoujo manga-ish. lolz. but still good. its light hearted and breezy. i love. good work! |
chi2lyn chapter 1 . 6/24/2016 NAILED IT *sfx explosion* |
ilovevocaloid93 chapter 1 . 6/24/2016 Luka and IA are NOT related. Research about Vocaloids before writing any fanfics about them. |