| Reviews for Black Rose |
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Guest chapter 6 . 4/26 Cinder has the belith and has no idea what it would summon and Ruby rape by Griffith oh that would make everyone pissed off even salem and her faction and the grimm would be in unding rage and protect Ruby from Griffith. |
rcontrerasflores499 chapter 5 . 3/27 creo que se te olvido que la armadura berserker es indestructible irrompible lo máximo que se puede hacer es seperar la armadura pero tiene algún tipo de magnetismo con el usuario cuando la usa en simples palabras gust puede recibir daño pero a la armadura berserker no le pasara nada y si se sepera se volverá a unir |
Yannicolas chapter 6 . 3/10 Is this garbage? YES! YES! |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/1 Its scroll not phone. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2018 Your fic sucks, Guts could have skated with ease |
seliasabiamara chapter 6 . 8/13/2018 sigiuente part e |
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 6 . 7/10/2018 ok... |
Axcel chapter 3 . 1/27/2018 From what I recall, Guts can sense Behelit, right? |
Axcel chapter 2 . 1/27/2018 So, Guts just goes ahead and trusts Ozpin for no reason. Not even counting the fact Oz went through his things, something only someone with ill intent or massive sense of self-righteousness or the like would do. Either way overwhelmingly implies Ozpin cannot be trusted. We know he can, but Guts doesn’t. |
Axcel chapter 1 . 1/27/2018 Guts with aura. ‘Nuff said. |
Bad Anon chapter 6 . 11/28/2017 If Berserk had more crossovers I probably wouldn't have read this. It's fine, with little grammatical or spelling errors but every character seems just a bit too wooden. And let's be honest, Berserk is blood and guts(hehe) and anger and a whole plethora of nasty. It just doesn't work without a M rating. RWBY is fine, but with Guts around the violence should be booming. The adherence to the RWBY plot line is annoying, but forgivable; literly everyone on this site has done something similar. Pros: Good grammar and spelling; by inserting Guts conflict to drive the plot forward is both plentiful and juicy. Cons: Underdeveloped plot and characters, with a crippling lack of Guts signature brand of violence. In short: Kill some humans! Send Guts to RWBY jail, escalate the situation beyond the ability of the "clairvoyant as the plot demands" RWBY bigwigs. Someone should adopt this; it's a quaint idea, and nothing of importance has actually happened yet, so a rewrite is a feasible option. Than all they have to do is flush out characters and plot, and enrich story progression. Not bad at all for a Berserk crossover. |
shelwyn chapter 6 . 10/30/2017 Rip. Divorce is the only option. |
shelwyn chapter 5 . 10/30/2017 I think that fight was okay but you just made it one huge continuous chapter it was kind of awkward. Marry me. |
shelwyn chapter 4 . 10/30/2017 That rant just made him seem fucking insane to me. Why would they believe something that crazy Marry me. |
shelwyn chapter 3 . 10/30/2017 Ah will you put in moonchild? That cute boy should teleport to guys in the moonlight right? Marry me |