what happen nexttt?

When can u update this story im bleeding here huhuhu

update please~

Wow, I cant help but to be impressed by such an intriguing plot. You portrayed the characters accurately as well, something that's very hard to accomplish, but you definitely did. This is by far one of the best starts to a KNB fanfiction I've read so far. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but the extremely interesting/suspenseful (not exaggerating) plot line more than makes up for it. This was very well done, and I mean that sincerely.

One piece of advice I can give you is to try not to set yourself too many deadlines. While it does motivate you to start, an author's bane is time; I'm concerned that if you rush yourself too much you may not produce a chapter as well-written as this one. Of course everyone who has read this so far highly anticipates the next few chapters, but I'm sure they will understand if you decide to prolong a deadline a bit as that means the next delivery will be that much better.

Not trying to pressure you or anything :p, I just felt compelled to write this review as this was a very well written start to a story, and like before, i mean that genuinely.

nice story ssu~
I want to read more ssu~!

I like it! Please continue!