| Reviews for Game Over |
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darklegendarysoldier chapter 1 . 5/28/2018 Good to see this back |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/29/2016 It's cool. |
XenaTheAlienChick chapter 4 . 8/26/2016 Really good chapter! Sorry for the late review school's been keeping me busy. Ain't it just fun when you're a senior. It'll be like a horror survival game with them going to the red zone it kinda gives me some Until Dawn vibes on how it might play out when they get there. |
Death chapter 4 . 8/23/2016 Definitely need more of the story. It was really good. |
XenaTheAlienChick chapter 3 . 7/11/2016 Me:Huh...neato Alex is gonna help out Ink by getting her home and Ink is gonna help Alex by hacking for him. Jack:*smile* you scratch my back I scratch your back kinda deal. Echo:*eyes light up* ooooh! Sounds like it'll be fun trying to get Ink past. Perhaps she could try binding although dependin on chest size it could be dangerous because it can hurt your ribs and damage your lungs if you aren't careful. Jack:perhaps she's need something like platform boots to imitate tallness. Echo:that could work! Me:all that shit is to expensive. And depending on what kind of scans they use probs couldn't work out in their favor. Jack:true true. Echo:*giggles* its a good idea though. Me:that it was. Anyways awsome chapter bro! I really wanna see how Alex is gonna figure out how to get Ink back to San Paro. Until then though the review is done. 0v0 |
eren jeager 1st chapter 1 . 7/6/2016 i love prototype continue |
XenaTheAlienChick chapter 2 . 7/2/2016 Me:Huzzah! An update! Leviathan:well arent you a happy teen Me:fuck yeah i am i needed something to read! I tried reading htf fanfics but they were all to boring. And that new oc i made i decided to make her human. Well in a sense human. But i digress. Leviathan:huh. I see. Me:yeah anyways nice chapter my dude! I love the little creature pacific they seem like such a cutie! Dunno what kinda creature they'd be but i bet it's cute as hell in it's own way! Such an intelligent little thing too. Leviathan:and we finally get to see some more action featured into this. Me:i know and alex same i hate large bodies of water i cant swim so being on a boat or ferry tends to freak me out since i am terrified of drowning. Uh i guess that's it as far as my reviews go so keep up the wonderful work buddy! |
XenaTheAlienChick chapter 1 . 7/2/2016 Me: OK ALREADY AM I HOOKED ON THIS (i'm hooked on a feeling! And i'm high on believing! *bricked*) Leviathan:YET YOU CANT FUCKING TAKE THE TIME TO CHECK WHEN YOUR FAVORITE AUTHOR UPDATES THEIR STORIES Me:*makes high pitched distress signals* I'M SORRY I WAS MAKING A NEW OC IT'S BEEN 5EVAH SINCE I MADE ONE AND SHE'S SO PRECIOUS. Leviathan:SHUT UP AND FINISH YOUR REVIEW! Me:ALRIGHT YOU DON'T HAVE TO SHOUT AT ME! (There's just more soup! *bricked again*) anyways like i said i'm already hooked and interested so obviously ima do what i always do and follow this story. Why? Because of love all the stuff you write because it's always so interesting and imaginative. Plus it's kinda neat to see you get back into writing for Prototype again. The last time you wrote for that series was i think back when i was into Happy Tree Friends. But yeah anyways i am already wanting to know how this turns out! Good vs evil, light vs dark, mono e mono. Who will win that is the question. Leviathan:alright you're done. Ima have to stop you their before you end it like an old episode of total drama island. Jesus fucking christ... |