Please re-write I know you can do better!

The fact that you put that Naruto was getting abused by CIVILIANS made me lower this stories rating a couple notches. Naruto was well known to outrun NINJAS! In cannon he wasn’t beaten, he was ignored and isolated! Almost everyone refused to acknowledge him, which is why he was loud mouthed and wanted to be the Hokage, he wanted recognition and because of the few people to acknowledge him!

So I'm going to guess this will still be continued hopefully, as this was very intriguing to read so far. Keep it up when you have the chance, and I hope you feel better.

Okay then, that crazy thought about Naruto being her dad is wrong but I'm not far off in that they're family. Cousins, not sure if distantly or not since her father, Theo Uzumaki, is actually Kushina's brother in your story or just someone close to her.

Y'know...when you mentioned that her father's bday was the same day as Naruto's I made a joke about how she's in the past and Naruto ends up being her father who went to explore outside the elemental nations in the future. And then you started naming their similarities. While those may end with having the same shape of face and eyes, Kushina would be her grandmother and the violet specks in her eyes and red tint in her hair (when the sun hits her original hair color) would make a lot more sense. This thought doesn't seem so crazy anymore

I can Hardly wait for the next chapter. This story is right up my alley. And I read it with a british accent coz you seem like you'd have one when you write like this. It's bloody brilliant I'll say. Cheerio then.

I like this story so far. It's actually somewhat good. There is so much crap on this site, so it's good to see some quality shit once in a while

Please continue I love reading your story's . I don't mind waiting for updates I look forward to seeing the new chapter.
Thank you for your storys

Love this story and can't wait to read more

I am so upset that this has happened to you.
I will definitely keep a look out and get a hold of you if I see any.

great story.

You know some troll that doesn't like your stories is going to repost it just to make you drop them don't you?

People stealing others stories and posting them as their own is a thing that happens and all that can really be done to prevent it is reporting it so said stories to have them taken down. The people that do it don't care about anything you say telling them not to, they are just assholes and will do it regardless. Basically your ultimatum is just announcing you are going to take all your stories down soon, as someone is definitely going to post them elsewhere whether you post such an ultimatum or not. It probably makes it even more likely now, as internet trolls will do so just to get that reaction.

Well that helps explain who her dad is.i wonder if her dad came from Naruto's dimension originally and then she got sent there as a result of that. Hence his name being on the memorial stone? Please continue!

UPDATE PLEASE