I just love it, I can't really say so much about it, just that

Wow really cool story, even though it was short.

Quite good

OMG! Great job this is by far one of my favorite crossovers for Pjo & Hp.

An interesting take on a Harry Potter/ Percy Jackson crossover. Look forward to other works done by you. Do you write any other crossovers?

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Hey, I loved this crossover :) I loved the first person point of views and your writing style! Your SPaG was clean, and this story flowed nicely, and it was also easy to read. I like how you made Percy Jackson Harry Potter's babysitter. I also like how you made Percy's middle name "Zale". That's a great name *thumbs up*

In the note, you wrote "wizarding peoples", but it should be "people". Just a quick fix :) Otherwise, this story was an amazing crossover and I loved it! Just a suggestion: when you wrote "Harry's P.O.V" up on the top, you should bold it and put it in italics like you did in the end, when you wrote "End of story".

Thanks for supplying the crossover section with an amazing story that will live in the reader's hearts forever! :)

- Red Roses1000