... I'm joining. Death to ABUSIVE PEOPEL!

This fic is off to a good start. If you publish more chapters, I'd be glad to read and review them. :)

I actually rather liked this. It was a nice, funny, quick read. X3

I don't know if you're still writing this story or not, but if you are maybe you could add Pretty Lucy? You totally don't have to, just a suggestion. She's kind of like an oc, I guess, but not really... I dunno, but she's a crazy blonde girl named Lucy who kills people with a bracelet-ring combo that's connected by a chain. She holds the bracelet and slips the ring on her finger then strangles people with the chain. And normally afterwards she uses her long black nails to kind of carve up their faces and writes "Don't you think I'm pretty?" on the wall. She's got a black tongue, all sorts of piercings, and a white mask that covers one eye with red blood dripping from the eye hole (her face is all burned under the mask). And she's just really violent and rude and has a tendency to hate everyone except maybe E.J. because he saved her life once or Sally because she's too cute to hate.

ANYWAYS, you totally don't have to add her but that'd be cool. X3 Either way, I look forward to reading more of this. Good job! :3

Finally a story that isn't oc oriented. Since you suggest for more characters I recommend looking on quotev for the creepypasta orgins story, that particular fic has an extremely wide amount of characters to choose from. But here's a list for who I expect:-

Appy the Apple
Dr Smile
Zalgo
Bloody Painter