HOW DID I FIND THIS FANFIC ONLY TODAY? IT'S THE BEST I HAVE SEEN, MY GOD! And ... It's been a long time ... How did I not find out before? You probably won't even know the existence of that comment, but maybe in the distant , thanks for this wonderful fanfic!
Ps: I'm Brazilian, I used the translator all the time, kisses from Brazil
As it is said in Brazil: ISSO NÃO DEVERIA ACABAR ASSIM!

Dang.. this fic has been my obsession for the last two days and now I’ll never get to read the end of it. Heartbreaking. I really wish I had read this two years ago when it was still being updated because I promise I would have reviewed the shit out of it. I feel a little dumb writing this in 2018 because it has been quite a while since it’s been updated lol. But I had to at least leave one comment about how talented of a writer you are. I love how clearly I was able to picture each character acting the way you depicted them to. It’s obvious you have a good understanding of each character and their personality. Thank you for at least writing this much so I can enjoy my brostavo obsession. Tbh I recommend you post your stories to archive of our own as well. I find that site easier to get feedback from through kudos as well as easier to navigate. Just a suggestion! I think you would do well on there and see a lot more reviews and credit for your work!

I've never written but I'm so in love how you picture these too. Usually I'm annoyed when couples get in so much fights because they don't listen out etc. but the way you put the scenes togerher fits so well and your writing style beought tears to my eyes this chapter I'm feeling so sad for her...so please continue that one

Sorry I didn't mean to have it sound like that intentionally and I won't leave anything that sounds like that again. If I do it is an accident or I just did not realize it.

At least u are getting suggestions and a few reviews and nothing. I promise to review the next chapter

I understand what you mean but if you aren't going to continue can you please at least let us know

What if Brooke had to make stavo jealous by kissing or dating drew

What if Brooke has to kidnap Cage and the killer kills Cage and Brooke feels guilty

It would be cool if Stavo tried to make Brooke jealous in the next episode or to see if she still cares for would also be cool if the job was Brooke having to get Cage and Stavo together to like twist things but she doesn't want to and the text from the unknown person says do it or I'll kill one and make it seem like you did it or something like that and she does it but Stavo is confused when she trys to and askes her ... you can contine if you want to use this idea

It would have been cool if Brooke's dad came in and told Stavo to leave

It would be cool if Brooke's dad asked to come in and Brooke just mmhmms him.( I don't know if that makes sense)

It would be cool if the job was to kill someone but she doesn't want to go through with it and she won't go with it and she keeps getting unknown messages that if she doesnt do it he'll get hurt or someone she cares about.

Please don't make her murder someone for the job from the unknown person

It is great that you are staying true to how the characters. I would have loved to see the girls try to get Brooke out of the house to go to the movies or get something to eat and without her knowing Noah brings Stavo and Cage and they try to make things right with Brooke and Stavo. I think that the parents should have been in the chapter and try to cheer her up and just the three of them bonding and watching a movie or looking at old family photos.

I would have loved to see Brooke's mom amd dad try to comfort her