ah i love a bit of humor along with an amazing plot. Cheers for making it not so... Mary/Gary Sueish. I'm not one to gush but i do love it. The refrences to Alice in Wonderland add a certain realistic quality to it. :)

This story is seriously cool and I hope there is more soon. I hope that the Weasleys find out that Ginny is not dead.

Noooo you suck! Why no more chapters? Why? I thought this was just a normal "harry runs away" story but then it turned out to be friggin' AWESOME! And just when it was getting good, too.

cool idea wit the pensive!

I had my doubts at first but this was realy good. So if Dumbledore started the Lost Boys dose he know that Ginny isn't really dead? If so that will be really funny.

I hope you update soon!

~T1F~

I'm finding your story very hard to follow. From what I do understand, I think it's a neat story, but trying to find a staight line in this tangle is giving me a headache. This is just a bit too ... stream of conciousness, almost, for me. Too many conversations, not enough background and descriptions. You're all over the place. NICE IDEA though!

SWEET LOVE IT

That was rather interesting. I wonder what Dumbles had to do with everything... well I'll just have to wait and see. Keep up the good work.

I'm confused as to how Sirius and Mundungus became tangle up with the Lost Boys.

Excellent story, overall. It is weak in the last few chapters which likely explains why you lost the momentum to ever pick it back up again. Really sad, really, as just your genius plot alone was allowing me to forgive the weaknesses.

I hope school, working, and all that worked out for you.

Lot's of comments for this chapter!

Oh. I thought that was Ginny just being stupid and starting her own battle apart from what the Lost Boys had planned.

I like that Bill's gone vigilante. It adds another layer of complexity to the story.

BTW, how'd Ginny get the mark if she hadn't been around at Equinox?

Hermoine, for once, was very in character in this chapter ) In prior chapters she's just been an honorable mention of sorts. Ron still remains that same honorable mention.

I've never, ever heard Arthur Weasley use such large words let alone muggle words correctly. Further, he seems to have a vindeta himself against the Lost Boys which was never explained.

The whole Luna never being mentioned at all, a comment including her in a list of missing persons, and then having her pop into the story out of thin air thing was very, very confusing. Up until the last chapter I had figured you'd decided to just ignore her existance in the world like you had Crabbe, Goyle, Neville, and other misc Hogwarts students.

Freeforall in Gringots! Why not! Who cares if we increase the probability of being spotted by Goblins or keepsafes.

A Diagon Alley fight sounds just dandy. Stupid newbies. Just kill 'em both off and save the Lost Boys the trouble.

Drco want in? Sure!

This mysterious vivi wants in? Sure! Join the club!

She's a sister? Why not!

So much for security. I hope Mad gets upset with Raven.

I just realized that I can't count the number of brilliant concepts you've included within your story. On the other hand, I have to struggle to count cliches within this story, and they're weak cliches at that: "Harry expelled from Hogwarts" (rare), potential Ginny/Sirius (rare), Ginny outcast after Chamber of Secrets (rare), and Harry runs away and doesn't return after blowing up Aunt Marge (uncommon). Fabulous, fabulous job!

It's quite interesting how you weave the story such that all sides and groups are experiencing comparable concepts at the same time )

Quite the daring piece of work. Creative. Very well written.