AW! that was such a good story!i almost cried! u are a great author and i love the part with the 2 bitbeats legend thing. u said u werent planning on a sequal...but u should make one! like, the next generation when the 2 bitbeast take new form and new OCs! ya! thatd be so cool!

well, keep up the grat writing!

~miss-all-that-and-more (MADAM...lol)

Oh, my, God, this story is sexy. (I'm sorry that's how i compliment on everything now)... It's so beautiful! I loved it i loved it i loved it i loved it... I LOVE IT!

nice

aW! that was so cute! I wished that she would have returned his feelings. I liked this part the most(correct me if I write it wrong):

He looked at them, a childhood friend and a girl that would never return hi feelings.

THAT WAS SO SAD! (starts crying) POOR HIM!

OMG! I'm crying! That was beautiful! I loved it!

Great story! I loved it. It was a sad ended, but action(a little) and lots of romance. Its was different. Kep your stories comin. I added it to favourites!

i like the story but i felt real bad for kai. honestly i liked the beginning better...ya know? when she was still a mystery and before they came to the final scene

thats so sad

u just have to wrtie a sequel and make it longer! this story was awsome just plz make a sequel that is longer but eother than that i t very good.

That was GOOD

so SOPPY! I hate it! For your expertise in writing, your stories sure are romantic sap, as I realise it now.

nice job

ever dark~!

ew how cute!

ew, Freaky.