Read this chapter a while ago, but just noticed I didn't leave a review. Amazing chapter! Very well written! You truly are an excellent story teller! I also am VERY grateful you didn't end it on a cliff hanger, but included the battle, reunion, rescue, and first aid scenes into incredible chapter. Helps me sleep at night lol! Can't wait for the next one!

Hey! I love all of your fanfictions that you’ve written, and I was just wondering if you were planning to ever finish fire on the water. Thank you so much for your stories!

Just re-read this chapter... I'm not crying! Lol Can't wait for the next chapter! Take your time though.

Bro this chapter tore my fucking heart out then just stuffed it back in and now I don't know what to do w myself...

THANK GOD YOU DIDN'T KILL MIKEY OR HAVE HIM DISAPPEAR FOR WHO KNOWS HOW LONG! I WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN ABLE TO HANDLE IT
and gjsgfuksdhukwbcakuaihcf when Momma Leo finally went to go hug them, and they all were crying, and Leo told them that he has them now I just...I lost it. My babies sounded so desperate and broken :,(

Your writing is absolutely beautiful, captivating, skillful, and filled with emotion. You, Poleepkana, and Nutella Swirl, are my all time favorite turtle authors. I legit feel so inspired to write like 20 TMNT fics rn because of your works Lol

'The two humans called for him, rushing forward - but both stopped abruptly when Leo punched the floor hard. He hung his head and his shoulders were shaking, and he left his fist against for floor for a moment, sort of crying and sort of sounding like he was in pain. Suddenly, he roared angrily and punched the floor again several times.'

*clutches chest painfully* Ugh god my emotions are a mess...

And I really loved that moment when Casey swooped in and screamed "TAKE THAT SONS OF BITCHES" lmfao I love him
Please let Raph and Mikey be okay when they wake up...or not, I do love the whump xd, I'm hela excited to read the sequel too! I already know it's gonna be awesome ;)

Also I am so so sorry for your loss, *sends virtual hug*

Hey I love your story! But, I’m, are you gonna update the fire on water story ever? Because it’s really good tooooo and I gotta know what happens!

Oh... my... croissants... AHHH! WOW! That's was so amazing, you honestly have such an amazing gift! This should be a movie lol. Also, thanks for responding to me, right back at ya! Take your time, you don't have to rush, I'll just be patiently waiting to find out what happens next. Thank you for taking time to do all of this, and have an amazing day!

YES! They’re finally all back together! That horrible planet is finally behind them! I was getting really worried about Mikey, Donnie, and Raph, and when Mikey went through the portal I was like, oh no, you are NOT about to make him disappear right when they’re all supposed to be reunited so now they have to go on some impossible side mission to save him! Thank you for not doing thatAwesome chapter. I wish Leo had gotten to kill more monsters though...like all of them. I think he needed to kill all of the monsters... Then bring them back to life and kill them all a second time... And then blow up the whole planet until nothing is left but dust :D (really, I’m not normally a violent person, but that planet was asking for it. Needs it, even.)

Can’t wait for the next chapter! This story has been a great reason to ignore schoolwork.

Sorry to hear about your dogMy Newfoundland had to be put down earlier in the week; she was old and had started suffering from several medical issues. It’s hard to say goodbye to such loving, loyal friends, even when it’s for the best. I hope you’re doing okay.

Raph cussing at the demon was awesome XD Raph‘s the best XD
Also, I hope the whole planet gets destroyed...after Leo slaughters every monster on it

*Slams hands on table*

This is so freaking good! Who gave you the right to mess with my feels? Well, I guess I did since I continued to read it lmao.
I love it all... A sad/guilty mama!Leo, some sad yet happy turtle boi's, supportive human siblings and a kick ass robot father figure who worries about his windows... I genuinely cannot wait for the next chapters, I'm so excited for what's to come!

I hope you know how well you write, cause you're pretty damn amazing! Easily one of my faves, along side Echokazul!

This is not a chapter to read in the dark; that monster at the end is hella creepy! I’ve been mentally teleporting Leo onto the planet for the last couple chapters so he can beat the snot outta these creepy freaks and save his bros already XD I can’t handle all the tension! I hope they catch a break soon!

I loved this chapter so much that it’s hard for me to review it. There was just so much that was great about it, that it’s hard to pick only a few things to discuss. I really liked that you showed how hard everyone fought - not just the turtles, but April, Casey, and Hunnicut. I’ve been anticipating the reunion for so long, and getting there is just so sweet. Great job!

im not crying you are.. :,) I love you and your books

Ha, dude I am way to exitedP This fanfic is a master piece and so freaking awesome!

... YYYYEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! So exited! I Sr the notification squealed. I can't wait to see what happens next!

The ONE night I decide to try to get my sleeping schedule back on track I find a this page-turning piece of work. Ug! Needless to say I could not just stop reading and go to sleep. With that being said, I CAN'T wait until the next chapter!