Oh wow, I so enjoyed this story and loved the arranged marriage take on their relationship! Watching them fight and still fall in love was just so sweet! Thank you for your hard work and sharing it with us!

Love the sarcasm of Hitomi and Van! Especially love the salmon part and I totally laughed my ass off when I read the line that the salmon's scales were impenetrable.

Hmm, not bad for a first chapter! Not bad at all! That conclusion of yours really wrapped it up quite nicely-in fact, the character development shown in the end was done so well that it redeemed the beginning of the chapter (which, truth be said, needs some editing). Based on the beginning, I had planned on quitting after the first chapter, but the conclusion...changed my mind )

cheesy or not, i liked it. now, since i have no complaints besides one, i need to go read ur other finished stories... my complaint isn't really a compliant, it's a add on. when hitomi and allen were talking on the beach you put "Tis curiosity that killed the cat" retorted Hitomi instantly

you should of made allen say-but satisfaction brought it back.

it's my friends thing and i nono, i can't read or hear someone say curiosity killed the cat without saying but satisfaction brought it back... sorry i rambled.

*sighs* what another great story. Alas... You do need to keep up the wonderful work *hint hint* IN OTHER WORDS YOU NEED TO FINISH YOUR OTHER STORIES! sry about the outburst, but i hope you do realize that i will haunt you till the day you update those stories, so I suggest you better start updating (not to sound threatening or anything _;;) Anyway, like i said in the review for "Over my Head", im going to type a private message to you giving you a reason to finish those other wonderful stories of yours. until then...

FLUFF! I LOVE FLUFF!

yeah to you! great story! better fluff!:) you definatly capured stubbornness as a trait anyway-wanted to shout n' scream at them! and the humour in it made it a fic that should be in everyone's fav fics! brill fic- now update the others!*cough cough every moment gets better...*

SUCH AN AWESOMESTORY, BETTER UPDATE FAST B4 I TOTALLY LOSE MY MIND, LUV UR STORY.

That's cute fluff, good fluff even. A fun story. But I didn't quite appreciate the anachronistic references. o.O

Such a nice fluffy story! And Van being afraid of fish, that really had me laughing.

Didn't you say something bout an epolugiey thingy? Pweese:( What happens, I really wanna see how much the advisors hate Van after! Pweze!

lol!

awesome fic

i thought it was amazing until the last line.. the "its why i love you"... i know you love the fluff.. but i think that in a way that kinda ruined the whole story.. but /ignoring/ that, lovely!

PP

for some reason i always get high when i type up reviews... must be something about the.. review...ing...ness of it all... **clears throat**

anyways... awesome fic!

ok, with Vaughn, Merle, and the fish...i was laughing soo hard! I laughed so hard i had tears coming out of my eyes! and i couldn't answer the phone at work! oops...oh well. Thanks, i really needed that laugh. great story too! loved the fluff also...time for the next story! Ja ne~

What a cute last chapter! Aw I wish it could never end. Anyways when are you going to finish your mext fics? It's taking yu a while, so now that this one is finally finished continue the other ones. Please.

I like it! No let me rephrase that: I love it! Keep on righting I've read some of your other fics and liked them to. But your taking really long with the other chapters. Anyways that doesn't matter that much See ya.

I thought it went really sweet! But when Van kept finding Hitomi in situations where he took it the wrong way, it was the slightest bit repetitive. So, you could also have done another situation in the story where it goes the other way around. But still, I found this fic really great! I liked reading it a lot! School has been a major pain in the $$ so looking forward to coming home everyday to read this fic was a great treat after spending a day in a boring hell. ~ Keep up on your writing! You're a great writer!