Reviews for BON VOYAGE! |
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lizard-senpai chapter 16 . 12/3/2017 Revenge-Zoro |
ZadArchie chapter 14 . 7/6/2017 By accepting requests for stories and chapters through review, you are directly interacting with your audience. Interactive content is not permitted on this site per the Terms of Service we all agreed to when we signed up for accounts. Accepting requests through PM is an entirely different matter though, and you may want to make this clearer with your audience. It might also be to your advantage to delete and then repost this story so that the admins cannot see that you have already accepted requests from reviews. Take these suggestions into consideration, as they will help you avoid ToS issues in the future. Please understand, I say what I say in the spirit of what this site is about: making good stories great, if not brilliant. Best, Zad Critics United |
Friendshipper chapter 13 . 7/5/2017 Beautiful. I loved the last sentence, it describes many things. |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/4/2017 Ice Cream - Child Luffy & Ace & Sabo :D |
Friendshipper chapter 1 . 7/3/2017 Awesome drabbles! If you still take prompts I have some... Choose what suits you best: Adventure- Going Merry Hammock- Stawhats Questions- Kid Luffy Falling Stars- Robin Lament- Brook Breakfast- Nami Mustache- Sanji Naive- Chopper Nose- Usopp Sleepless- Zoro Marine- Bellemere Chains - Olvia Prison- Rebecca Admiral- Coby Breeze- Smoker Justice- Tashigi X Mark- Vivi Flying- Carue Princess- Pell Manners- Kid Ace Dragon- Kid Sabo Jolly Roger- Garp Children- Makino Milk- Dadan Party- Shanks Rage- Bagi Fairytale- Alvida Peace- Lucci Hook- Crocodile Feathers- Doflamingo Brotherhood- Corazon Deep- Law Laugh- Kid . . . . . . . . . . Keep your writing up! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2017 Defenestration, Whitebeard pirates and Straw hat pirates |
lizard-senpai chapter 8 . 2/7/2017 Love-Nami |
lizard-senpai chapter 7 . 12/2/2016 This was fabulous! Thank you for actually writing it! |
lizard-senpai chapter 1 . 7/4/2016 Missing-Luffy |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2016 Yyukjsjsjsmsbkshqkxbmwxjmxospqowiikxnemmdnd. In other words it was good. |
liffie chapter 5 . 6/28/2016 Strawhat - Robin After two years, if that's okay |
Martyn chapter 3 . 6/22/2016 How about the next one has Nami gaining a muffin-top weight, to the point where Luffy brainlessly wonders how she got a third "boob" with all "three" of them jiggling? |
MVX chapter 3 . 6/22/2016 Thanks for writing my request! |
MVX chapter 1 . 6/20/2016 Glasses- Zoro :D |