can you continue this story?
if there are continuity problems then can you remake it and continue that story?

where is the sequel ?

I hope this story is continued or a squeal is done

Thank you for writing this, it was very enjoyable!

Dirt Rider

Good idea, sound execution, lousy prose and a good bit of work on style and some fixing up on the plot, you would have a good story.

This is a great story really hope you haven’t abandoned it id love to keep reading more of it

So a Kryptonian/Asgardian hybrid, yeah that's gonna be a powerhouse warrior

Point of order: in the scene between Kal, Lorelei and Ward... Why in the world did you have Kal falling for Ward's tactic? With Kal's superspeed he could have easily subdued both Lorelei and Ward before the biker had bled even a little more. Once again, a case of not utilizing Kal's powers to their utmost.

I'm pretty drunk, which drastically lowers my standards, but this is an entertaining read, so I hope you're not dead. If you're still alive and checking reviews, thanks for providing free entertainment. I'll not offer constructive criticism at this time, on account of I'm hammered so it'd be shitty ineffective attempted constructive criticism. Hey though, if you're still kicking, keep writing something. Not for me, for you.

That seems pretty ooc for basically all the Asgardians. No pantheon is that fluffy unless they're prepping to lay out a biblical smackdown.

Kryptonians can be affected by alcohol, if their powers are burnt out, or if it's freaky alien booze, or enchanted booze, or booze exposed to red kryptonite, and potentially other types of kryptonite. Stan Lee got wasted off of like a sip of super-hooch Thor brought to share with Cap in the Age of Ultron. So yes, of course Asgardian alcohol would blast a total lightweight like Superman. Lightweight when the chemical is capable of working.

Too lazy to log in. You have a good story and average writing but it needs more... flair? Maybe greater focus should be placed on descriptions.

The second last paragraph was just painful to read and should definitely have been rewritten.
Something like:

"It took Clark a few moments to be sure but it seemed as though nothing had changed. His abilities remained intact and the rays of the sun felt no different as they fell upon his form."

Just my thoughts on the matter but nevertheless an interesting idea you have here.

Wow nyc stori

please update! story is getting really good

please update! story is getting really good