ok, seriously, exactly how many unique powers and items does he need? two fucking magic swords, Kyuubi, blue fire, likely still has chakra as a devil... Just getting goofy. And the Gremory clan must have the worst fucking security EVER.

An attack by a bunch of Fallen, no security responds. An attack by a sentient sword or whatever, no security responds.

uh yeah, sorry but, Phenex can regrow their HEADS. Even wounds done by light weapons, so long as it's not like, true holy sword level, will still heal. So this permanent scarring shit is lame and ridiculous.

there is a crossover challenge called the infinite dragon reborn where ophis is reborn as naruko/fem naruto I definite recommend taking it up. other than that good chapter.

WE WANT MORE RIGHT NOW PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

I loved the story I just dislike some actions you took

Does Naruto have the Power of Destruction? Kushina should be the Daugther of Zeoctis and Venelena , right?

let me just ask you one thing, whose parents says to his/her girl that you should sleep with other guy, really man, if you are one than tell your daughter to sleep with me. Aren't you disgusted by the thought of this thing. man don't write things which disgust people even if its an ecchi genre high school dxd fic. it only shows how of fucked up person you are

its a bit forceful, its like an old strange man giving a kid toffee and she/he takes it. LOL how does that sounds weird right, same goes for the starting

More rias

sigue con las historias

Naruto getting more evil pieces is a ridiculous premise. I understand that there was a nicer way to say that but I believe in brutal honesty. Changing things like that just to suit your needs just seems like tacky writing.

I believe you've spread yourself way to thin with Naruto. I mean that in all aspects as well. Whether it be his powers, his friends, potential romances, or what's going on around him, it's just too much. You can't cover it all well and your story is suffering for it.

Natuto can't live a life in both the underworld and the elemental nations. Honestly, the underworld is his only choice. He's practically immortal, people will notice if he's not aging. The whole kiri rebellion I'd pointless in your story and can only serve to further spread your stories focus.

Kuroka couldn't sense he was a devil...seriously? Sorry, but that's kind of stupid. No matter how ooc you are choosing top make her, she would still be an amazing sensor.

I think you've spread out Naruto's peers a bit too much. A sacred gear on top of everything else seems nuts.

I'm surprised raiser would be such a jerk to family. I guess that's just how you decided to write him.

Why didn't the Phoenix tears heal him?

I found Naruto's sudden comfort with the adults hard to swallow. Adults were, after all, the main perpetrators behind his abuse.

By the way who undressed Rias? She was sleeping and holding on to Naruto.

Otherwise, so far so good.