while i dont mind the cliches too much, its really annoying that you didnt even *try* to bother giving any of the daughters ANYTHING unique, children are not just clones of there parents, that is just lazy and boring, not to mention bad writing.

Very cute fic. And kind of rarity among Monmusu stories. Really hoping to see more.

Loved it, hope you keep it going.

Protective daddy is best daddy.

Kinda surprised there wasn't a boy in the mix. But oh well, still pretty cute!

Cute, they are definitely the girls' daughters. I like the story, it's good for relaxing and enjoying cute stuff. hope to see more.

Please update

The amount of times I got stares from people in my dorm for squealing out loud during this story is enough for me to read the rest alone, this story is cute and exactly what I needed from a Monster Musume family story, I love it!

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU********** well it is rated T should really expected that *sigh, had such a good set up to nice job turning a rated M/R show/ manga into rated T though its nice would like more fluff but meh beggers can't be choosers

I absolutely love it! Cute and funny at the same time. The heavy time skip in chapter 4 would be the only thing I mind. Besides that, I hope you write more.

I feel the time skips are too large. that's all I have to say on the matter.

You kidding? The old man is probably still laughing his ass off

Well props to him for beinging back a dark time in his past, not sure if incould ever do it

Hhuhuhuuhuhuhuh XD

You’d think sound proofing would be the FIRST thing they invest in.