Ever gonna update it?

This is really great. U should update it sometime if ur not busy. would def read

Hahah, moms... Glad that they're back again...

I love this. I recently rewatched Avatar: the Last Airbender and it's fresh in my mind so the character development of Yosuke reminds me off Sokka's. Headstrong and blunt but very compassionate and dedicated. AnyWHO I put fill instead of feel in my last comment and now I'm sad.

Daww... Why the cliffhanger with Yu being an ass ? Can't wait to see the next part !

Well I'm not one to input my ships- who am I kidding, Risu all the way lol. But this is well written and most of time the characters don't seem OOC which makes the reading experience more believible. While I doubt that Yu would end up in situation like this in the first place, I do believe that is how he would handle a situation like this. Honestly, it kind of nice to see Yosuke not worship the ground Yu walks on for once. It makes him a more dynamic character that I wish I would seen more in the series. Before this gets too long, I love your writing style and is very easy to read and understand. Don't stress on trying to update all the time, just write when you fill inspired. Keep up the good work!

This chapter Is amazing and I wonder what will happen In the next chapter?.

This chapter Is good and will you continue with this story?.

I like this chapter and It would be funny If Chie's food Is good. I like Yu and Marie as a couple.

I like this chapter and I like It that you made Zen a part of this story.

I think this chapter Is great.

I like this chapter and I like the reaction the chef got when Chie ordered her food.

This chapter Is good and the story gets more Interesting.

This chapter Is great.

I think this chapter Is good and I hope that Yu will choose Marie.