Reviews for Primal: A Zootopia Fanfiction
Dafaq117 chapter 22 . 6/27
If you didn't want anyone complaining about how you killed nick, the you shouldn't killed him in the first place dumbass.
CreativeSpirit0163 chapter 22 . 9/16/2019
loved the story.. bravo. But please don't say things like these OC's are mine so dont steal them. its petty. You stole Nick Wilde, Judy Hopps, Chief Bogo, Ben Clawhouser, and Finnic for your story. when you and other fic writers do this it belittles the creative people at Disney who have never given permission to you or them for your stories. Just write and be humble.
XD chapter 19 . 10/15/2018
Nick is an f'n Jesus-Fox!
Guest chapter 7 . 10/8/2018
Dude, this is Zootopia.
"Dove's" deodorant would have fit.
(Despite this is a mammal and not bird universe)
OldCoyote chapter 22 . 5/29/2018
Hmmmm good story it just I feel the City owes Nick a good 8 figures in lawsuit monies seeing as how they diagnosed him dead 3 times left him to starve for over a year and then buried him more or less alive that fox deserves some reparations.
OldCoyote chapter 8 . 5/22/2018
Good story so far, but are you tellin me this girl worked 2yrs with 100hr work weeks and now that she is responsible for caring for the mental health of Nick she still has to go on patrol and doesn't have like a years worth of paid vacation? This is one of the reasons I didn't go into law enforcement. heh
Guest chapter 19 . 4/16/2018
What an absolutely disappointing, shameful excuse for a climax. The story was alright at the beginning, and I foolishly hoped that it would get better, or at the very least not get any worse, but then it did. Instead of Judy saving Nick, or Nick winning the battle against his savage self, there's instead some moronic psuedo-spiritual, "power of friendship and love" afterlife nonsense? I've seen some really stupid plot points in fanfiction, but that really takes the cake. And, spoilers, first of all you're not going to bury someone in a body bag, second of all if you did, he wouldn't have been able to move his arms to reach the zipper from the dirt pressing down on him, and third, he wouldn't be able to dig himself out of his grave, fox or no. What a waste of two hours.
LathropWolf chapter 22 . 7/29/2017
I just want to say I really really *really* appreciate all the hard work you put into this story. It is intense, but in a very good way! There isn't that many stories willing to take on supernatural/metaphysical and much more. You took it on head first, and came out a winner. Actually found myself saddened but hopeful when Nick died.

Expect more in a private message, need to put my thoughts together so they come off correctly.

Astonishing work!
GhostWolf88 chapter 12 . 7/25/2017
Just finished chapter 11, I finally figured out where I've seen (heard) this type of discussion that Nick is having before...Lord of the Rings. Gollum...my precious... Very good take on the story, it's tough to stop reading.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/23/2017
I have cryed three times during this God like fanfic. First one was when Nick started dying, two was after he ACTUALLY died but reserected (Can't spell worth shit, I know) and number three was at the sunrise, final scene just because I was glad that Nick and Judy could properly show their love of one another.
One of, if not, the best 'Nick gon' die' fics I've read on this site, and HOLY HELL, THERE'S A LOT OF 'EM!
Guest chapter 9 . 7/23/2017
I already knew Koslov would have a Russian acsent. But I have already imagined him as like the former Spetznaz, silent type.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/22/2017
I see you threw in a Safe Paws reference. 1955 Cypress Grove Lane.
JudyBosak chapter 22 . 6/4/2017
Boo 0/10
user523523812352342 chapter 22 . 5/15/2017
Well one arc ends another begins :D. Luckly I read this story at the start of summer just in time for the next arc to begun
user523523812352342 chapter 19 . 5/15/2017
I'm at a loss, it was exciting the feels were strong but the deus ex machina came at a strange moment, its welcomed don't get me wrong! Not hating on it, just came at a moment I didnt expect. Now I need a tall drink and some ice cream before i continue. you got me all messed up in a good way.
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