Awwwww... I liked this, not so short, short story. The shorter chapters were, surprisingly, nice. It allowed me to take breaks more often... though, I also got caught in continuing to read multiple chapters at a time... so maybe I didn't take more breaks. ;)

I liked Enyo, Ares, Captain. I loved Garrett's and Enyo's nicknames for each other. I loved their connection. I loved learning their first meeting was unique and unexpected. I felt so bad for Isa/Bella/Sabel in her exhaustion and the decisions she made to help protect her family and coven, but am so thankful she can now live a more peaceful life. 3

I loved the spies among the snakes. I loathed Edward and what he did, but am thankful for him as well. Yet, I'm not happy you made me thankful for him... yet, I am because he was the catalyst to Isa/Bella/Sabel's peace and her family's need to hide.

I'm not at all saddened by Alice's outcome. Though, I am saddened by Angela's, yet also thankful for her to no longer be used.

The ending was a wonderful outcome overall. :D Though, I wouldn't mind a few more chapters of just Garrett and his Sabel's life together. ;)

I don't know what else to say. I enjoyed this shorter chapters story all the way through. For a story with chapters as they were, there was a lot of stuff packed in there. 3 Therefore, I know there was so much more I enjoyed about the story... I just cannot bring each thing up as I write this review.

Hey there. So, I think this story deserves a review. I started reading this fic close to when it was first posted and I really enjoyed it. However, I kind of fell off the wagon so to speak and wasn’t checking in for updates. Just yesterday I decided to revisit it, especially because I knew it was finished. And I am so pleased that I did. This fic is a really impressive example of how wonderful Drabble fics can be, the amount you are able to convey in a limited amount of words is amazing. I really enjoyed your story and you characterization of Bella specifically, because I haven’t really read anything else where she is portrayed that way, or even similarly. So I want to give you all the kudos you deserve and let you know that I think you’ve done a fantastic job. You’re one of my favorite authors on this site and I cannot wait to read more from you. Have a wonderful day!

Great story x

I loved this badass Bella!

Loved this

Fantastic read well done

I love this story, I didn't mind that the chapters were short it actually made it easier and better to read. I love that you thought of Sabel being another nickname for Isabella as I've never heard that nickname before. I adore the storyline and the love between Sabel and Garret and I absolutely loved the endingx

I LOVVVE IT

Oooh
This was my first time reading a drabble and you did a great job! Thanks for the story, I loved it!

Is there something wrong with me if I say that I thought it sweet?

Yeah! Take that mother fuckers!

The major bitch arrives

Yeah
Bye Angela

Neither do I
Gosh
Worst than Bella being dumb

Lol
Maybe because she is kinda brainless
I mean, Bella would do stupid things when she thought she was protecting someone, but Gosh, they explained Angela why she shouldn't go and she saw the Volturi. She's plainly brainless here