And thus, I have found another fanfic that is left discontinued.

Too bad you quit. This is really good. Also, DaveJade is best ship, and I will hear no word to the contrary.

This is really good! i hope you continue it!

I'm loving this so far! Please keep going, if possible-there really aren't enough of these around.

So cool they have their god tier powers as semblances.
of course they won't be nearly to the level we see in the comic but whatever

I like how they all pretty much already have their god tiers.
I don't know, I just like it.

Ok, this is really good! I like what you did with John's hammer and the random dust function.
I also noticed the cover image is Yang as the Maid of Rage.
Ayyyy...

This story is incredibly written, and the characters are spot on. Please continue this.

Dave is perfect. John is perfect. Your a great writer

PFFFFF OMG DAVE YES

Great job! worth the wait!...kind of. still hella impatient about it though. Thank you so much! it was a bit short, but it was nice. You do a pretty great job at capturing likenesses. keep up the great work!

I love this storyI love that you kept Dave's WTS

I love this story. I have to ask. I know that you are on a hiatus, or are done with fanfiction, possibly, given the long time it has been since the last update. but i have to ask. Please. Update this story. It is wonderful. and there aren't that many Homestuck stories. at least not like this. I really enjoy it. if you dont, thats is understandable. but i would love it if you do. though again, its your choice.

Please make more I love both fandoms, and the way you characterize is just great. plus I can't wait to see the homestucks as a team

If you are not willing to finish this, I'm willing to finish it for you. It's a good story so far, but I also have a vision that could take it much farther than it's gone.