I don't know what to think about this story. Bulma is pissing me off for some reason that I actually found my self skipping most of the story :/

Likes both stories a lot! :D

Yea! There has to be a sequel about trunks coming alive! U here me! U better do it!

Awwwww saddest story i have ever read. I críed wen the story was over. Y did u had too put trunks on death?! I thought that they Will go out to search for the dragón ball to revive him! :(

You're an asshole for killing off trunks. I didn't see the point.

HEY, WHAT THE HELL!

THERE BETTER BE A SEQUEL WHERE HE IS REVIVED!

I'M WARNING YOU YOU'D BETTER WRITE A THIRD ONE!

I LOVE THIS!

OH...HEHEHEH...GOD...HAHAHA...I...HRMEEHEH...CAN'T...STOP..HAHAHAEHEEE...LOUGHING!

I absolutally LOVE THIS!

THIS IS WONDERFUL!

wow Great story I loved it I hope you do more

Well I have to admit you are a good writer but you had one major plot hole in the story, THE DRAGON BALLS! I mean if piccolo is still alive the dragon balls could have be used to wish back trunks. Other then that great story keep up the good work!

Oh now come on. First you kill off Trunks and then Bulma and Vegeta are happy? No way. He was their son. Why didn't you bring him back with the dragonballs?

I can't believe the story ended like that.

I mean, don't get me wrong, you are a great writer and everything, the story was really great too, but I am just really upset that Trunks is dead.

I can't believe that he is never going to come back.

That is just horrible.

It would be really cool, if you wrote another sequel to this story and maybe wish Trunks back to life.

I really enjoyed your story and I would definitely read it, if you write a sequel.

I hope you think about it. :)

I can't beleive this is really true. Trunks can't be dead. Please let this be a bad dream or something. I can't stand it.

I have been crying throughout this whole chapter again.

I have been crying the whole chapter long.

This was so mean of you to kill Trunks. I can't believe you actually did that, and now at the end of the chapter, I suddenly think of the dragonballs, and that they can wish Trunks back.

I am so glad that there is still something that they can do.

I just hope that you wrote that in your next chapters.

Well, I guess I will just have to find out.

Vegeta is going to be pissed when he finds Bulma at Yamcha's.

This is definitely going to get interesting.

I hope Trunks is okay wondering off on his own. Can he even swim yet?

That was seriously funny. Bulma got Chichi really good this time. She was so flustered, that she didn't even know what to say. I jsut can't really imagine Chichi like that. She doesn't behave that way in DBZ.

Not that I can remember at least.

I also hope that Bulma is going to be nicer to Trunks. All this slapping him accross the face, it's not good. I don't think Trunks really understands what he is doing wrong.

Bulma or Vegeta won't even sit down with him and talk about it calmly.

They just let their emotions take over and thats it. Then Trunks cries and is upset.

I hate seeing that. Something has got to change.

Can't wait to read the next chapter. ;)