Reviews for Changing Fates: Ice Burns
Nancy619 chapter 1 . 6/25
You have such a magnificent creative mind I can’t wait to continue reading your story’s ️️
wolfviking chapter 11 . 5/23
cant wait to read more.
EvilUnicorns4Minions chapter 11 . 5/19
I do like reading your fics on here as with the fanfiction reader app I can read offline when my wifi goes out.
twinklegoesthesea chapter 11 . 5/6
I love how AO3 is set up. Thanks for the updates!
Guest chapter 11 . 5/6
Please don’t switch over to AO3 completely! I know the tagging is more complex, but I find it so much harder to navigate it the site and find what I’m looking for. If you switch over completely, I won’t ever find it...even if AO3 becomes your main site, what’s the harm in updating your fics here on too?

Anyway, I like that Alex and Rhaegar’s son won’t be named Aegon. Obviously the prophecy is real in that the Long Night will happen, but Rhaegar twisted the prophecy around to fit what he wanted. It never said *anything* about Aegon the Conqueror and his sisters reborn. He just liked the poetic symmetry of it. That’s the problem with interpreting prophecies! I am curious how Alex is going to go about killing off Varys and Baelish...will she do it herself or will she rely on Rhaegar and maybe Brandon/Arthur now that he knows she k it’s a bit of the future?

I agree with Alex (and you) that for someone who spouted off so much about acting for the good of the realm, Varys sure did cause the realm to blood over and over and over again. Personally, I think the show’s version is too simplistic and not what George Martin intended. He did tell D&D what the ending would be, but by then they’d cut out a lot of plot lines...so my feeling is that he told them that in the books, Varys would betray Daenerys for Young Griff/fAegon, but by then, D&D has cut that character plot line, so they had to go with Jon. I don’t know if he was a Blackfyre loyalist or off Young Griff was a son of a tanner from Pisswater Bend, but I do believe that Varys never intended for Daenerys to survive in the beginning and he sure as fuck didn’t want dragons around because dragons are something he can’t control on his chessboard. I mean, when Illyria gave Daenerys those fossilized dragon eggs as a wedding gift, they had no way of knowing they would ever hatch. And Varys and Illyrio knew that the Dothraki didn’t cross bodies of water and that that would likely take Viserys and Daenerys off the board for fAegon. If they actually wanted Viserys to succeed and be crowned, they wouldn’t have encouraged him to sell his sister for an army that (to their knowledge) would be absolutely useless in gaining him the Iron Throne. So yeah, definitely think Varys was working against Aerys, Rhaegar, Robert Baratheon, then against Daenerys, and against the entire realm for the purpose of putting his favored “king” on the throne.i don’t buy his “for the realm” schtick at all.
ProTaggingProperly chapter 1 . 5/5
What? This author has an AO3? Arrggghhh. Atleast, AO3 has a superb search engine, enough that I can avoid this fic. Why are the ffnet and wattpad writers migrating to AO3? AO3 is for the more mature audience, definitely not these *authors* forte. Just imagining the likes of Anna Todd in AO3 gives me the creeps. Yikes.
And, someone reviewed that this is not a Mary Sue, they probably did not read the Chapter 1 title that says A GIFT FROM THE GODS. Gurl, not a Mary Sue, amirite?
ProTaggingProperly chapter 1 . 5/5
Why is almost every fanfic or wattpad fic (yikes) always a wank? Made to rub and rub the author's ego using their very own Mary Sue avatar. Be it Female or Male MCs, it's either a Mary Sue or a Stallion lead. Oftentimes, it stanks of desperation which chokes readers with unwanted secondhand embarassment. I was hoping this fic will prove to be not from that category based on the *raving* reviews but, meh.
Mari Wollsch chapter 10 . 9/28/2019
lovely, wil you ever continua? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Valen Goncalvez chapter 10 . 2/5/2019
follow it soon, pleaseee!
Guest chapter 3 . 2/4/2019
I love this story, but the lack of punctuation makes very difficult to understand some paragraphs. Please, mind the punctuation, use commas, they’re important.
reyesrachel805 chapter 10 . 1/30/2019
Cuando actualizarias? O hasta aqui llega el fanfic?
Crystal Blue Butterfly chapter 10 . 10/25/2018
Good job!
I really like this story.
I will looking forward to the next update;)
Greetings!
SemiraBlake chapter 10 . 8/24/2018
My review apparently didn't upload but basically REALLY EXCITED for how Alex will interact with more characters.
SemiraBlake chapter 9 . 8/23/2018
This is completely late considering the story's post date but I figured that I could respond while I binge read. 1.I read the notes on the last chapter when I binge read and in addition, the ones that catch my eye like this "chapter". Honestly, your writing has been so fluid that I have no clue if it was first or third person. I don't need to check, you keep writing and I'll be hooked either way. :D 2. Not a Mary Sue because everyone would have to like her and her life would have to magically work out. She worked for it and thus I feel like she is just efficiently successful. 3. You DEFINITELY did the characters justice. I am naturally bothered by the mad long for being one dimensional but he was meant to be that way so 10/10 for not making him a real person. That is me being bitter at the Mad King, you are doing a FANTASTIC job with the characters. 4. Don't like the story, I love it.5. I will check AO3 for your stories once I finish my recent download list( I have a reminder checklist so I will actually be finding it later). 6. I love orange.
SemiraBlake chapter 10 . 8/23/2018
My brain always blanks with the idea of the bigger picture when it comes to reviews. I ended the chapter thinking "Jaime making baby funny faces sounds adorable" to "Can't wait to see how they kill the Mad King and other blights" . Rhaegar and Alex are OTP and make me smile like when you see old couples in the park who are super in love. Alex's genuine care of others is heart warming and empowering. I never regret a second I spend reading your work. It is beautiful and I can't wait for an update, thank you for writing!
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