Keep going! This is so different but in a good way! I am hooked and await for an update!

Plot is good, pls try to continue

such a great plot! i hope you update soon!

Mucho mejor
Esta historia tiene más profundidad que la otra
Felicidades!

please update love it

I like it so far. Update soon

Please update soon.

I would like to read more about this story. I like the premise.

Please continue

Please update soon!

I stumbled upon this revision when I went back to re read Marked the other day. I loved the original, it's one of my favorites, but I agree it need to be reworked and to my amazement you are doing just that. That's fanatic, most authors won't do that. Good for you. I love the changes you made and they work much better. I can tell the story is going to be much more fuller now which is great. Hope you keep up the good work and continue. A little advice if you are having difficulty meshing the two together just try rewriting a whole new chapter. It doesn't need to be like the original at all, just go with what feels right. Don't get held up with the old your, writing style has changed, move on to the new. Anyway I hope you continue cause I'm loving what you've done so far.

I really like how you switched things around and made things your own. Can't really say anything about the original since my first read was the revise. :P So far I really like how the kid-like group has interacted with each other. :)

Awaiting for more chapter can't wait

Keep going please. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED It! I want more romance between Sakura and Gaara.

I love this story. Can't wait to see how it progresses