i like this srory but the grammar mistakes are slightly ruining the story. i thought liam was still on vacation

I'm happy with the way you ended things. I noticed Shane never technically answered Noah's question on whether or not he agreed to marry him. You obviously implied he said yes, but yeah he never actually answered. I don't think you needed to include all of the diploma certifications. Looking at it for a second I assumed it was going to be a song or lyrics of some kind that Karma may have written or something. I find it strange no one ever wants to write about those college years. They'll write about the high school years till kingdom come...but they don't write about college years. I mean there is a reason why those are considered the best four years. It's where you make the most connections and actually let loose and have fun. Plus I think most sexual discoveries and figuring out what letter or letters you may represent in the LGBTQ community happens during those years as well. I mean I've heard of plenty of people that thought they were one thing (gay/lesbian), but in college realized they were another (bi/pan/trans/asexual/aromantic, etc.). I don't think anyone ever thinks fondly of their high school years. It sucks people always skip over those years I mean look at "Pretty Little Liars" they went from their high school years and then flashed five years forward completely skipping past all of those discoveries and adventures that they may have gone through. I wish shows would stop underestimating the importance of those college years instead of focusing only on the high school years and then post college adult years.

Hmmm, I don't remember them making a promise about going to a specific place and enjoying a night together before the summer. It's been a while since I read "After New Years". I think that was a good way to get Amy to think about a possible marriage to Karma in the future. I didn't expect Amy to have to stuff the ring box into her own pocket, for a second there I was afraid that Karma would see it and mistakenly think Amy was planning on proposing to her or something. I think it's sweet they're going to include Alex and Sabrina in the plans that they made. I'm sad that the next chapter is the final chapter, but I'm looking forward to it.

I kinda thought you were going to tell us what their end of the year projects ended up being. I don't think Penelope would be mad about balloons and a goat when she knows they're graduating that week. Especially considering she and the school are by far the chillest. She was all about being different and doing whatever to express yourself. I would think the balloons fall in the same category of the kids expressing their joy about graduating. I'm not surprised that Noah helped fund homeless shelters and decided to raise awareness. That does sound like something altruistic that he would do given the fact that he was in a homeless shelter for being trans. I'm also not really surprised that Noah wants to propose to Shane, but I am curious as to why they would get married and not Karmy. Granted personally I don't think anyone should marry straight out of high school cause I'd say you grow more during your 20s than in your teens. So I would like to know why and what your reasonings are for each couple. Also you stated you would hopefully send me that last story pertaining to their marriage after you were finished with this one. I definitely still want to read the story if you're willing to share it. Is this the final chapter by the way or are there a couple more left to go in this story?

Thank you for taking the time out to write this great story. Loved the last chapter! Can't wait to read more.

Damn, I didn't think Amy would be the one wearing the lingerie. Why did Amy say she would make it up to Karma though? I thought her present was supposed to be those 100 pictures commemorating their memories. It sounds like a pretty thoughtful present to me, so I don't understand why Amy would need to make it up to her and why she had a sad tone in her voice. Also I think you meant to say that Karma set up a scavenger hunt for Amy with those notes, not a blind hide and seek game. Since what you described is a scavenger hunt similar to the hunts Amy always makes for Karma on her birthdays. If you noticed Karma's birthday episode consisted of a bunch of notes Amy made specifically for the scavenger hunt with clues on each of them. I assumed you hinted to the scavenger hunt for that very reason, scavenger hunts are clearly of sentimental value to their friendship. I look forward to your next chapter.

Oh damn, that's not smart of Amy to forget their one year anniversary like that. Why would Karma think her question is dumb if it's legit a part of their project? I'm assuming Karma is also working on the same project with someone else as her partner and probably why she asked Alex the question in the first place to get an idea of what her and her partner can do for their own project.

P.S. I'm sure the other chapters are just as interesting, don't doubt yourself.

I look forward to what you have in store in the following chapters. I just wanted to point out that apparently a lot of those people that stand around waiting for the ball drop how to wait for hours on end so many of them end up pissing and cups or in their pants. It's probably much easier for a guy to piss in a cup by easily pulling himself out...girls obviously can't do that so they'd be stuck pissing in their pants. It might look glamorous to be there, but it's probably hell on earth for all the people actually present for it. All that body heat, the constant bumping of bodies and no place to piss. Yeah I definitely wouldn't want to be there myself. So them drinking coffee...coffee being a diuretic means they'll be pissing all over the place. Coffee definitely wouldn't be a good choice...drinking anything probably wouldn't be a good choice. Unless they can hold it for an obscenely long amount of time.

not please ! The history is beautiful! I love, still updating !

I think you should continue the story. Don't cut it short. I'm surprised you made Alex this complex, especially with her backstory. I hope we learn more about Alex's sister, since all we know is that she died. I'm assuming the sisters might've been super close.

Karma's the one that suggested the trip though...so why would she be worried about going the trip on account of her parents? Didn't it occur to her that going anywhere would cost money regardless? Why suggest a trip if you're worried about the finances? That makes no sense. I hope Shane isn't having doubts about Noah, but I'm assuming it's just him worrying about not getting into college at all. I look forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for the update! :)

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Your story geting better and better. Love the emotions. Please keep us updated. Thank you. Kudos