I know it's been awhile but I love this story! If you ever get the urge please continue it. Lots of love )

This is one of the funniest divergent fanfics ever!
I ducking love it

"...the floor just looked like it needed a hug..." OMG I laughed so hard at that part I literally fell off my bed.

Ooooooh ma gawd that is A LOT of swearing. But yea this is rly good. KEEP WRITING!

Awesome story! Would like it if eric's pov was shown more often and can someone tell me how 'larhea' is pronounced

Someone asked how Larhea is pronounced- it's pronounced La-Ray.

plz plz plz update i really want to read more

I was really excited when i saw that someone finally made and Eric and Tris fanfic. I saw the M rating and was like okay,so there will probably be sex. Well, I personally like role reversal rather than personality change. I like the idea of tobias being a protective brother, but you kind of turned him into a monster and you turned tris into a whore. Eric was how I expected him to be though.

loved the scene with max telling truth

Please update your story soon as I would like to know what happens next

So hilarious

I love this Tobias and tris the pranking siblings that's hilarious I couldn't stop reading or laughing so thank you I can't for more

love it

please don't listen to the people who are going to down grade your work because of there stupid jealousy I'm a new reader and I can and will honestly say right now that you have written/started some of the best books on here I'm a huge fan and I guarantee you that I'll continue to love and favour your fantastic work so thank you for taking the time to share it with usHaley

I think her and her brother are his kids

You had me laughing from chapter one. The truth serum and pick hair was genius and then the best was the Smurf oh god I had tears from laughing so much I really hope you continue cause your very good at comedy among others I have read.