| Reviews for Birthday Present |
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Lizard1988 chapter 10 . 4/10 If it was O.W.L’s the twins would be 7th years. They are only a year and a half older than Hermione and 2 grade ahead. |
MotekElm chapter 17 . 7/8/2019 very good, but sucks that it leaves off on a cliffie, without the romantic resolution. I hope the sequel is updated |
MotekElm chapter 1 . 7/8/2019 great opening |
Dauntless10 chapter 10 . 6/26/2019 Really quick note-this is meant to be taking place in their sixth year, yeah? Which means that O.W.L.s already took place, last year, and they’re over now. So I think what you mean tot say at the beginning of the chapter, was that “Exams were coming faster than Hermione expected...” |
Dauntless10 chapter 3 . 6/26/2019 “Ron can fuck off.” Ginny, my girl, the real MVP. |
subhana chapter 3 . 4/15/2019 birthday present |
Gabriele Kazlauskaite chapter 3 . 3/24/2019 You know, i can kinda imagine Charlie going on a murder spree on Bill and vice versa. |
seablue4u chapter 17 . 7/26/2018 I read this entire thing. Yes, I realize it's almost 2 years old. But now I need to know when Fred and Hermione get back together because you just ended it on a cliffe. |
Scorpia11 chapter 17 . 7/12/2018 I loved this...broke my heart a little near the end. But I despise Ron and Harry for feeling Ron's feelings meant more the Hermiones for nearly this entire thing. Which is spot on for the books too. Cant wait to read the next story! |
Guest chapter 17 . 5/17/2018 Just finished part one and have to say before I dash over to the other one, THANK YOU! This story is so cute and drama ful but not overly so, I’m a little outta sorts because I’m missing my Fred/Hermione but here’s hoping it doesn’t take to long for a reconnection! |
Rhynestone chapter 17 . 10/28/2017 I loved it! I'm going to start reading the next one now (it's 12:14 a.m. I really should get to bed and my eyes are falling but I think I'll read just a chapter before) How you write them is amazing I really hope he lives Rhynestone (on mobile and really don't know if I remember my password or not) |
Guest chapter 8 . 9/23/2017 Fred and Georges Birthday is April 1st |
stelladarling chapter 17 . 9/6/2017 I've enjoyed reading this story so far. I feel you present the characters and emotions well. The break up was unexpected, and while I think the reasoning was sound, part of me felt like it was a decision Hermione would have agonized over more, given the way she agonized over so many other thoughts or choices in the story. Looking forward to hopping over to the continuation! |
aeileen chapter 14 . 8/1/2017 I've enjoyed this fic so far and the premise is good, but the editing needs a lot of room for improvement. There are so many spelling errors and grammatical errors that it makes my head spin. I now how annoying editing can be as I write as well, but this is slightly ridiculous. So many sentences are lacking punctuation and names are terribly misspelled. I have continued reading because I enjoy the story, but even five minutes more of editing would be so beneficial to the overall quality of this fic. |
stefanie1955 chapter 6 . 7/7/2017 I think Hermione is being stupid and Ginny is right. Be clear with Ron the next time it seems he wants to try more than friendship. She needs to let him know that he only sees him as a friend. Why is she being stupid? This is the most logical thing to do! |