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Guest chapter 38 . 12/15/2018 My theory about the culture thing is that different sub communities existed before the kingdoms unified so each had different cultures and since Remnant worships individuality they all survived but got classed as Valean or Mistralian like Asian or Western food. |
Phaseling chapter 7 . 12/7/2017 Okay... so, I really do like the way you write, and how you tell the story, and the way you wrote the characters is pretty great, and there's been very few spelling or grammar mistakes I've seen... (shoot, I'm rambling again...)... Buuuut that's not what I decided to make a comment for. I want to thank you, because it looks like Lancaster may actually have a chance to be a, or the, main ship in this story, which is my favorite ship by far, and I really, really, Really needed this right now. So thank you for writing this, seriously. Keep up the great work! |
Eragon the Shinigami chapter 24 . 1/9/2017 I never noticed this until now, but it looks like I may have found a slight pothole within this story. From what I've known reading this, the events of V2 occurred where nothing bad happened, but everything good did happen. But it was mentioned in Blake's thoughts a few chapters back that at worst she's just a roommate and former WF member, and that made me figure that all the events of V1 did happen. But my question is, if V1 did happen in that way, why doesn't Team JNPR know of her Faunus heritage? It's likely in the show they found out between V1-2, so the fact that they don't know stood out. |
Serena chapter 34 . 10/12/2016 YESSSSSSS Okay thank you for the freezer burn it was quite appreciated. Also, your characterization of Jaune is on point. Seriously, this fanfic is amazing. Gotta keep reading now! |
Dongyrn chapter 50 . 9/23/2016 And that, good people, is how you end a story, perfect mix of friendship and fluff. This has been one hell of a fun ride over the past 50 chapters, and I've loved every minute of it. Kudos to you, man. |
zachary2 chapter 50 . 9/22/2016 Sad and happy. |
Yakosh chapter 50 . 9/22/2016 Sad to see it end, especially on such a short chapter. This was probably the most reliably updated story I've been following too, consistently bring me RWBY goodness. |
Boombox94 chapter 50 . 9/22/2016 Through the good times and bad times, everyone found happiness. That's all I can ask for. It always makes me tear up to see the end of any story that I really like. Whether its a book (Ther Ranger's Apprentice), game (looking at you Crisis Core!), or a good Fanfiction like this. I could go back and read this months from now and it'll probably be like the first time. Any story that can make me feel something is worth another play through or read on my part. Gah! The Ladybug! It's so adorable! Thank you for this, making me realize the adorablness. And Freezerburn so good too. Yang's just the right person to get Weiss to warm up to everything. They get each other to calm down in their own ways. I'm definitely gonna miss the new chapters to this story, but if you do a sequel then good lord I'll be there. Same with your next story, which sounds like it'll be adorable and filled with feels. You did an amazing job with this. I don't think I can say that enough. |
ZHsteven chapter 50 . 9/22/2016 The end? But... who won the festival? Was it Zwei? I bet it was Zwei. On a more serious note, I'm sad to see the story end. It was a great journey, and I'm glad to have experienced it while it was ongoing, rather than binge reading a whole story in one sitting. Getting to chat after every chapter was a great experience, and I hope to continue it. |
Sephiroth'sDarkness chapter 40 . 9/21/2016 gahh i just want more juane not even pyrrha and juane just juane solo T_T |
zachary2 chapter 49 . 9/20/2016 A sense of excitement carried me throughout the chapter, in the pit of my stomach. I believe that this is one of the most adorable chapters so far. The description was a little underwhelming for the restaurant, I had to rely on my imagination for that, but the description of the dress was titillating. Interesting how Ruby got a bit upset over not being able to pay for the meal, though I suppose some people are like that. Quite an easy chapter to visualize. Regards, Zachary |
Yakosh chapter 49 . 9/20/2016 Sad to see this story coming to an end. I look forward to reading and hopefully enjoying as much whatever you have planned next. |
Pitperc80sKid chapter 49 . 9/20/2016 Excellent chapter. I must say I had found your story awhile ago while it was still young and I was initially not interested because I do not really like stories where Juane and Ruby are together. After some time I came back to it and found it to be like one of my favorite novels i just could not stop reading it (I actually went to an 8 hour shift at work one day with no sleep because i could not stop reading.) Regardless be proud sir you have crafted a beautiful story with beautiful characters and this shall remain a favorite of mine that i will share with others as often as I can. I look forward to more from you on the future and i cant wait to read the final chapter of this excellent tale of Friends and Loved ones. -Pit |
ZHsteven chapter 49 . 9/20/2016 I'm not sure I'm ready for it to be over. I need regular doses of fluff to keep my own writing from getting dark and depressing. |
Boombox94 chapter 49 . 9/20/2016 When the waiter had the wine and told them about it, I'm pretty sure you meant Blake instead of Weiss. Unless Weiss was a ghost there and told the waiter so Blake or Ruby didn't have to. Either way, I wanted point it out to you. That being said, holy shit. One more chapter. This date was adorable. Ruby practicing with heels just for Blake was really nice and the fact that Blake didn't want to look good or beautiful, but just wanted to look cute was the best thing ever. I think if there is a scale of adorableness, Ladybug would be a good measurement for it. Weiss is a good friend to let them use her ship like that. Hah. She shipped Ladybug. |