I love your story.

oh i really liked this chapter. while shirt it covered the things that needed it. I cackled like an mad woman over shikamaru Predicament.

but ficus is a fu ny little thing. quite often like a toddler who wants to be helpful one moment, then a little shit the next for one reason or another.

THAT WAS A BEAUTIFUL ENDING TO THE CHAPTER!

This is a really awesome fanfiction and really well written great job

your writing style is super nice ! also i have been searching for a fanfic that involves kagome in the naruto universe and you did such a good job at incorporating her ! i hope you keep on updating because this concept is amazing

I’m crying, on the inside... and the outside

I almost stopped reading after the first chapter cause it wasn't what I was looking for. Now, I'm really glad I continued. I was up till 5am reading this fic. I just couldn't stop reading. Please continue, your work is amazing and I look forward to reading more.

cant wait till more!

oh damn, this uh... wow... The impact made and it hit deep. I am actually crying. Ah, so much. And I loved to read the memories of Kagomes and stuff during the funeral. And the end with Shikaku apologizing, realizing in full what he had done. Though Shikamaru's reaction to her locking the door, keeping him out physically.

They are growing strong and walking a road filled with turbulence. It is just so damn good. I love this story so much! And am eager to see what comes up with everything else in future chapters. But... I think I need to go actually go quit writing and blow my nose now... Thank you for a beautifully crafted chapter and the hard work and dedication that was put into it!

*blushes and looks very sheepish* This was way more. Sorry about the Pm's being turned off... on my profile is the reason. And I appreciate the indepth, and seriously need to go back and do some re-reading of the manga to pick up on the spots you pointed out to me. Then again, insomnia and staying up late... yeah... that and too many video games. As you know, I have turned on my PM's again as a trial run.

That and the block button might be my new best friend? Either way, *bows head and smiles warmly* Thank you! Remember sleep for yourself.

ahhhhh so good. I'm so happy you came back to this moment! Shikaku tends to be far too unemotional at times and I'm so happy you gave him the moment he deserves

Finally he apologized!

Awwwww that very sweet moment I hope to see more soon,

Omg! So good. I love this. It was good to see her struggle with this. Kagome no matter what has strong emotions.

oh, a bit of an inside look to Sasuke's feelings and shit towards his brother. He isn't happy and think Itachi brain washed Kagome. And wow. things are progressing, but the weight of the knowledge of hte 3rd passing is not easy on them. they all loved the old man... and this keeps to canon but I don't like it.