| Reviews for The Third Reincarnation |
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TekoloKuautli chapter 14 . 6/2 In a way reading about how disappointing the system of the afterlife is makes me feel worse than reading a tragedy. |
TekoloKuautli chapter 13 . 6/2 I'm with Yama, this disgusting disregard for the souls they are in charge of is enough to hate the gods enough that even knowing they exist would cause the same indifference towards them. |
TekoloKuautli chapter 12 . 6/2 I feel for Naraku, hope he gets his wish granted for once. Obviously, he has to because even the end of time wasn't enough to quench him. |
TekoloKuautli chapter 10 . 5/30 Poor Naraku, even if he is evil he was still a person. At the very least Kagome acknowledges him as such. |
TekoloKuautli chapter 6 . 5/30 So Inuyasha and Kagome had been together in heaven since their deaths? It fits, happy for them. |
TekoloKuautli chapter 5 . 5/30 Well. I can see how much of a headache the jewel caused the gods, it truly is beyond troublesome haha |
TekoloKuautli chapter 3 . 5/30 I like this god's explanation of how the jewel was created. |
TekoloKuautli chapter 2 . 5/30 So wait, Kagome's dimension ended and the Shikon Jewel came back the moment time stopped? And Koenma was there too so that means it was the same universe where Yusuke lived? |
TekoloKuautli chapter 1 . 5/30 I'm intrigued with this prologue. |
Mondtanz chapter 73 . 6/9/2019 I loved reading this (sometimes confusing but nonetheless very entertaining) monster of a story. It was very interesting to see what differences there were to canon. Some of the the references to other manga were noticeable but I had to look up which manga you referred to. Besides the categories this story is under I think I spotted Bleach, Akame ga kill, Gintama and Ruroni Kenshin. So kudos for writing such a convoluted but very well done story. |
Iheartlife888 chapter 73 . 1/6/2018 So the boil down of this pretty good story is “Botan causes some massive time shenanigans for Koenma’s love :)”. I’m game. Thanks for the good story. May you write some more Yu Yu Hakusho stories or Inuyasha ones! |
GirlAnimePrincess chapter 73 . 7/9/2017 Everything about the time loops and kami was confusing and really dense to try and piece together, even with your explanation at the end. I really dont want to know how long it took you to plan all that out and keep it consistent. On the other hand, I loved watching Dekuyume's life long redemption arc. I love seeing reincarnation fics for villains where they eventually become heroes through character development(well, I'd love that kind of fic if it wasnt related to reincarnation too, but reincarnation makes it seem easier because you can justify it as it being a brand new life. somehow) and sometimes even fight directly against their past selves. I've come across ones where that direct confrontation was lacking, because regardless of canon the author didnt have a good enough grasp of their own versions of the character to be able to play it right, or played it too safe and just said things were a particular way even though they didnt really convey that in their writing. But this one I loved the journey all the way through. I'll probably reread this at some point next year, and when I do I'll make sure to write further thoughts on things I notice in the reread! |
Arei-The Peridot Dragon chapter 43 . 6/22/2017 Loving the story. Very unique and covers a lot of wibbly wobbly. Just one thing to help; debt* not dept |
Guest chapter 31 . 2/15/2017 Holy hell, just when I think I've got my head wrapped around who each kami-person-youkai is, you throw me for a loop. And I love it. Brilliant! |
dxlmao chapter 20 . 2/13/2017 I love this, I love you! I laughed at the last sentence. |