Hope you continue this story. It's very interesting

Great start!

Amazing!

Well, you asked, but you won't like my opinion.

I don't at all agree with your belief that Lupin wasn't to blame for the Shack "joke". Firstly, I think that what little evidence canon gives tends rather to support than deny Snape's belief that the Marauders planned it together. (Lupin had, if anything, *more* reason than the others to get Snape warned off from following them.) But even if Snape was mistaken, it's still impossible to exonerate Lupin, the prefect who "every month ... sat down to plan" the next month's excursion with his friends. He knew they were reckless; he knew they were bullies; and he knew they despised, targeted and bullied Snape. Why wouldn't they use this advantage to hurt Snape? They used every other one.

Sorry, Lupin's as scummy as the rest of their little criminal gang. Worse even, because
1) he's regularly abusing his prefectorial authority to shield them
2) he understands that they're doing wrong.

(Marauder-era characters I like? Snape. No Gryffindors at all. But maybe the Malfoys , because Luc was kind to a shabby little firstie from the get-go, and Narcissa proves in DH to have a backbone of tempered steel.)

Awwwww man what a cliff to dangle from

A good chapter he insults her in his eyes and she laughs about it making him confused than she jokes and teases him but he sadly didn't get the "memo" that it was a joke now he heard something that makes him even more curious about Hermione and why she is in Hogearts really good so much suspense and a slow burn is good sometimes I feel they fall much to fast for each other in those time travel story's a slow burn is a good idea. More soon please *cookies for inspiration and the good work*

I like your story so far especially that it is from Severus pov that is very rare wonder how the interaction will go then I think potions will be interesting because it is a class from every house after 5 year I think. My fav is of course Severus but Lupin is great to donvt like James or Sirius that much Lilly is alright but a hypocrite he said one damn word in anger and embarrassement and she just quit their friendship for me it sounds she needed an excuse to get finally rid of him and nothing else.

"The time was drawing very near the it would" can i ask you if you by any chance typed this senstense wrong?

I never realised it was published in 2016 until reading the last chapter. I just want to say i am glad to come across your story. I wouldn't have if you didn't update it. It is well written and i love the way you describe characters. Not only they stay in characters but also you are great in describing threir emotions/feelings/thinking. It's...belivable(?)(cant find the right word)and I almost got upset over them who were treating sev badly. Lol i am struggling in expressing my thoughts. Sorry about that. I am not a native speaker. My writing is not as half good as reading.

Anyway i think, ron is unappreciated. He often become a jerk in hermione and other ship pairings though i understand the need they have it for plot. But i like ron... just not as much as severus xD

What irks me is the fact lemus did nothing his perfect duty when severus was bullied because he was too afraid of losing marauders approval. More tolerable than james and sirius but that's it in my book.

First time reading the pov of sev but so far i like it. It adds mystery. I wonder what made her to decide to use the time turner to go back into past. And what happened in the future that made her dicison. Can't wait to find out. She wasnt sorted in griffindore. I also like it because i strongly dislike marauders anyway.

Oh crap I'm drawn in! Always love a good Time Travel, and I love how you are writing this from Severus' perspective rather than Hermione's. Great work thus far can't wait to read more!

I like it. Keep smiling.:-)

pretty good

I can’t wait for the next chapter.

I really like that you are writing this from Severus's point of view. Please keep going with this story.