..did you really just ruin his animagus ability? if your just going to that why not just don't even make him a animagus at all, your a trash author

El fanfic llega hasta aqui o habra continuacion?

The only reason I’m not reading this is because I have just begun to watch one piece, so I’ll follow anyways

Go kill yourself gay, and I pray you never find peace in the afterlife.

I’ve never read/watched/seen one piece so I’ll just read this fanfic.

so good

Please have Harry end up with someone

PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON!

love it #p#

Please update or adopt out this story

This is very good, I’m sad it hasn’t been updated in a long time.

Updaatttee

This is quite a gem of a story you've got going here, and I especially love stories with long chapters like these. I'm pretty sad that I didn't find this until two years after it was last updated-though I'm deeply impressed that you were able to punch out the second chapter only ten days after posting the first. You've clearly got a budding skill for storytelling, though I do have a suggestion that may help some: the "'Name' POV" and such headers aren't really necessary can be inferred easily enough through text, ex. when Harry woke up and Doctor Stone told him he'd been found three days ago, and when switching to different characters and they are the focus of the scene.
I hope that helped, in whatever way it can, and that your muse for this story returns swiftly so that you can continue the good work. And finally, I hope that you're out there, living your best life and having a great time.

I hope the next chapter -

Did I catch a Transformers reference in there when talking about different worlds? I think I did, and now I have a mental image of Harry world hopping, coming out on Cybertron, and ending up as a damn Predacon...