I think you should know... less is more.
I see many repetitions of descriptions for characters rather than simply saying Sakura or he, she.
What I see this as... not fully developed writing style... by using the pinkette, the viridian eyed, the petite, the emerald eyed...you get the picture.
Once or twice wouldn’t be a big deal, but it seems like almost every paragraph this happens.
I must say, it continually takes the reader out of the story. Would you want to read something like that?
I think that’s a good rule of thumb in writing.
If you wouldn’t read in another story what you put in your own, then it needs more thoughtful time and attention.
I do have to say that the pairing is one that not a lot pay attention to, so this is nice in that regard.
However... again... what may be supposedly cute in fiction may in reality be alarming and unhealthy in a real life relationship.
Healthy Love. It’s important. Not obsession and angered highs and lows. I feel in many instances the bare bones ideas for different stories here are full of potential, but it doesn’t follow through. I don’t say this to discourage you or to make you feel terrible about your writing, but to truly take a step back, get some more opinions on these pieces and then maybe make needed changes, you might be surprised how it can improve and broaden your writing skills.

older men alike?! What’s wrong with you, writer? This context is creepy, don’t normalize... I can’t even.

plss make a part 2

pls make more minasaku fluff

pls update some more

I’m the later chapters Minatos easily angered thing is getting old and you’re making him out to be kind of an ass. You can do better as he deserves a better portrayal.

You must be one of my platonic soulmates to write all my dreams realized :)

I’m so very very glad that you are among the few of us o has a great love for this pairing. Why can’t more write for them? I absolutely love the idea and time travel is always my absolute favorite .

I can forgive the unhealthy relationship because children are jealous and possessive, but this bullshit can’t keep going as they grow up.

He’s an abusive asshole. Period.

Lots of grammar errors, seriously, fix them please.

Adorable, though I suggest some spellchecking because there are some grammar errors concerning verbs and tenses.

I have my feel of so much laughing

Can you pleaseeeeee make a story about the Of All Eras oneshot? I've already read it 100! I want more of the cute Minasaku

I love this fanfic! I love Minasaku! I love the way you make minato so possessive! Please please please make more Minasaku fanfics