Hello! I am the person who asked your permission to translate this wonderful fanfiction. I want to tell you, I finally translated it! Here is a link to the translation, if you need it

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I just started translating, so there are not many comments, but those who left a review are very happy with this work and thanking you for writing such a masterpiece! I am sure that in the future even more people will come across this work and they will definitely like it!

5 times I re-read this wonderful work! It's just beautiful! Characters very well preserved, it's like I read a manga. Such protective relationships between Ed and Roy, I really like it. The way they worry and care about each other, but they don't want to admit it in any way. Amazing job!
If you don't mind, can I translate it for Russian readers? They will really love it
P.S. sorry for my bad English

Goddamn, why does my relative have to be an asshole? (Same last name though spelt without the 2nd 'i')

Love the story though, even after all these years!

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Wow!
I am totally in love with this story! Since I'm a sucker for angsty, action-packed parental!RoyEd/Al this is exactly the kind of story I love to read.
Your writing style is amazing and I couldn't help but reading the whole thing in one go.
I really don't know what else to say other than the fact that I really, really enjoyed reading this fanfiction!
Thank you for writing this!

I enjoyed this story a lot. It was a great episode and delved deeply into the motivations of our beloved characters. Fabulous work.

Aaah this was really great! Those two are so bad at feelings. So bad. Such failures. Watching them try to emote is like watching the train go boom in slow motion. Loved it!

It was such a sweet amazing story. The characterization, the pace and length, the just right amount of hurt and comfort,... everything was perfect.

Thanks

Omaigat so good! I am a fan of you now!

Nice story!

...um, exactly how was Roy putting that first fire out exactly, considering you just wrote him being severely beaten, with broken ribs, shattered wrist, et all? Not to mention, Roy was trained by Riza's father, not some abusive monster.

loved it! :D
(i read all your hurt!ed stories!)

i love them all ! :D

i would love to see a Parental!Meas and Hurt!Ed from you:3 maybe just the two of them get stuck somewhere? out in a blizzard, or the forest? train/car crash? or something?

Ed can be a bit childish, and Meas is just so nice and fatherly!
so i love those two together!

and Meas seems like he knows alot of things, even medical training, perfect for a hurt Ed!

-ZeyTheFox-

Oh dear lord, man, if ever there were a time for things to escalate quickly! Daum! Seriously though, there is something to be said for the shock factor. The end of this chapter slapped me in the face, I loved it! I'm super excited to read more!

Ah dang it. That ending though. That was... Adorable. You're Roy/Ed banter is fantastic, by the way.
And the description of pain throughout the entire thing was amazing as well.
(I keep wanting to say Well Done in these reviews but then I think about Roy getting burned...)
Good job. _''' I'll most definitely re-read this one when I'm bored.

this has to be one of my favorite FMA stories- great job!