Gosh I loved this so much! Again I’m crying for the space family. How you managed to put both their emotions and is flawless. And that bittersweet ending... perfection.

Aww you're the best! There were so many good moments in that. father/son bonding at it's best. I love the way you write their dialogue mixed with description. It's a talent I lack. So is all this taking place the day after they got back or a few weeks after? Sorry if I missed that part. Do you think Kanan ever told Hera about Order 66 day? I always assumed he had...like when the Grand Inquisitor was insinuating that they didn't know he ran away...I kinda thought it was obvious he ran away since he's still alive. But I can see where he might have been scanty on the details. I like saving that for just Ezra...that way he truly has someone who understands. I just loved this one! Please write more!

I haven't seen the second season finale yet but I chose to read this one anyway. Your emotion is so telling and rich. Good job!

Omigosh yes! I'm horrendous at dodge ball bit wall of holy retribution... my gosh this kid has an active imagination. Woot woot!

XD passive aggressive... kid, Kanan's passive aggressive is smirking and making a joke about something

Aaaaawwwwww! That was adorable.

This made me laugh... :D love the bonding experience.

This was awesome! I love when Kanan acts like a dad. You are one of the best writers here in my opinion. I hope you have an incredible day!

- tiny turtle :D

NO, I'M NOT CRYING! YOU'RE CRYING! *goes in a corner and sobs heart out* THAT WAS *sniffle* AMAZINGLY FLUFFY AND SWEET AND PERFECT AND I WISH IT APPEARS ON THE SHOW! XD D':

You should really combine all this stories. They are good and all but with it all being connected they honestly belong together

Hmm... a long nice piece... I'm not so certain of the ending, though... it feels like there needs to be expanded. Especially on Ezra's secret of the Sith holocron and his revenge seeking.

This was so, so, so good! The back and forth between them, then Kanan sharing the story of his past with Ezra was handled perfectly! This was a great complement to your other story!