Shitty fanfiction
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I was enjoying your fanfic until it became a romance...

You should have warned me of the romance because I don't like hetalia shipping in general, whether it was canon verse or au.

I was left with a sense of disappointment that I can't find as much friendship fanfiction written so well as this one.

The first chapter gave me a good dynamic of friendship I liked the most, and it continued until half the second chapter.

I mean, I am not trying to sound mean, just put a warning on the fic that it is a romance.

And to tell you my honest thoughts, I felt that it was a waste to turn it into a romance imo.

Both sad and touching. You’ve written a great story. Well done.

This story makes me happy and upset at the same time, but I really liked it. I'm glad to have read it, truly. Made me appreciate the little things in life...

Thank you. I...I really needed this.
Thank you so much.

It feels like this story fell out from feels heaven, dropped unto the feels tree, but every feels branch there is, and landed on the manliest man to ever man. Then proceeded to make him bawl his eyes out. Twice. I'd give a more coherent review, but alas feels and coherency thread different paths. Thank you weaving this delightful tale, dear.

I DON'T SHIP THIS AND IT HURTS! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?

This is perfection. I haven't even gotten past the first chapter and it has already touched me. It's so deep. The characters are so emotional and real and everything is just amazing. Oh my gosh. This is just amazing.

I can't say that I'm a fan of "cancer stories," but something about your craft and carefully chosen words and beautifully woven world drew me in. And even though I knew exactly where the story was headed, the impact was not diminished. I cried no less than three times reading this story, and I refuse to admit to crying any more. It wasn't the sadness necessarily that drove me to tears, but rather the simplicity and the beauty. It wasn't a romance story, but it was a love story. And of course I admired the symbolism in the candles and the dying flowers, as well as the ticking clock motif and the heavy wrist watch reminding Arthur of his waning time. But there's far more to be admired for the delicateness and gripping realism of this little tale. I enjoyed it immensely, and once I find the courage to I'm sure I'll read it again and again.

Amazing! I am in tears and I just don't have the words to fully explain how beautiful and touching this story was. You're amazing.

Well shit I'm crying and i feel empty inside...

This is really good but really sad.

Oh my god, I'm so heartbroken is not even funny :(
Very beautiful story.

I love this soooooo much. Not surprised by the ending, but that didn't make it any less heartbreaking. This is also very well written, much better then some of the other stories I have read on this site. I would defiantly recommend this to everyone.