It is good that you have returned, I really liked this story, I think that now I have to read everything again, to catch up and not miss anything, however I hope you continue with this, thanks for the new episode.

Ayy, you’re finally back! I was really surprised to see the title pop up in my following section. I think I need to reread all the chapters before this just to jog my memories again. As always, thanks for the chapter.

I keep reading the title as Erectile Dysfunction and it's making me wonder if I have a problem.

well, this feels like an interlude and building relationships and characters

but in a nice way and that is a good way to prepare for what follows

and surprisingly you knew how to make meusel feel like a real person, with his own ambitions, personality type and stuff

I found it fun and intriguing the way the relationship between meusel and galen grew and grew

and sorry for just being able to read the chapter now, I had some personal problems and I could not be so active in fanfiction

I look forward to the next chapter, and it would be interesting to see how meusel, galen and chifuyu are related. It would definitely be funny

As some Random man said to me when I dragged his car out of a river, “Let’s get this Sumbitch’ pumpin’!”
Loving the series mate!

Holy crap, been a while since I got to this platform and hot damn these chaps are aweeeeesomeeeee! I have lots to say about the plots such as, "Is Shino going to be a 'normal guy trying to live a normal life doing a normal job,' with heroes, villains, other legendary figures, and sudden dangerous situations?" But I guess whatevers. I'm more interested in the office drama tho :3

Honestly, I was rooting for Chifuyu since the get go, tho I stay neutral for the sake of enjoying the story. Despite the drama, I have to say, while not perfect, the pacing of the story is great. I'm not pretty sure tho about some things like for example... is Chifuyu a type that makes small romantic action while being tied up with the chain of professionalism, or she's the type that simply keep her distance just because and even if she does experience "love" I'd imagine her to be more straight forward then subtly doing it. Meh, not sure which are OC and which are OOC, but whatever. Strangely and fortunately, this way works well too and the subtle romance makes way for an even cuter romance than a boring, anti-climatic/short-lived impact of a straightforward romance.

Then again change is the only constant in life... who knows what you have it mindOh well, hope to see a lot more awesome chapters sooo, good luck with life!

See ya next chapt, Capt!
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Hey there. Good to see you back. I don't do schedules, they don't work for me. I write stuff out when I got time to spare and then I'm productive. And now, I got seas of time. As for the whole stuff here, damn.

The UST is killing me between Chifuyu and Galen. Can you make a choice? Either they make a point or they start smooching. One of the two but this whole game and teasing is just a bit too much for me. If you go after this, then, I would think you'd be cliched.

As for the choices he got here, he got pushed into a very hard choice here and frankly, he's making a very stupid one

But one that requires tons of guts to follow through. His conversations with Chifuyu are nothing but proof for me.

He got himself into this. The question now is what he is out to do. This is gonna be a few tense weeks for me. As tense as you got this.

I do wonder how he will react to the fact his future sister in law is part of this merry little band.
Keep this up and again, drop by.
Saluut.

fucking fanfiction that doesn't let me publish the fucking review wn wl chapter 21
this is a review for the chapter 21

friend, the chapter was very good, on a scale of 1 to 10 would give a 7.5 or 8.5

Why a 7.5? This is because the part of Galen kidnapped by Sulliban happened too fast, you created a great expectation but it fell apart very quickly, I don't say it's bad, but it wasn't what I expected, and I know that at some point they were going to discover the " kidnapping "of Galen, but why so fast? The phantom task seems a bit incompetent and I know that Galen was able to get out of this since Orimura's quick response to seeing this situation was very good and blablabla only this is a disappointing point so I hesitate to put a 8.7

Now why a 8.7?

The development of the relationship of orimura with Galen seemed to me excellent (although a little fast), since when they put them in an extreme situation they stop playing the fool and tell themselves the truth about their feelings, it seems to me a very successful part and in part It has to do with what I like more Galen X Orimura than Galen X Komine

Also, as in the whole chapter, there is the doubt that if he sees his friends again or if this will be his last time, this gives him a more human touch, since he shows that he has fears and insecurities, and I know that this it is also explored in previous chapters, but not as strongly as in this
... well, that's all I have to say, I honestly liked the chapter a lot and enjoyed it a lot, I can't wait for
the next one

And the next chapter will try to see people's opinions when they see Galen's disappearance or will it be about his permanence with a ghost task?
fuck

Is it normal for me to be excited to see you updated?

I think not, but it is reasonable since in the previous chapter you left it in a cliffhanger

this'll be fun

I must say that this fanfic is different from the others I have read.
I thought it would be easy (put an oc in the academy and interact mainly with the protagonists) but it was not so
Galen has his own personality and history.
In general, when I read in other fanfics that the OC had old friends and introduced them, I got bored, because in general their personalities were too unique or practically did not have one, they looked more like an NPC than a real person.
but here it is not, enjoy every moment of the part of alica and ralph even when you interact with the other teachers
I know it's not perfect and it has some parts that don't quite convince me but so far everything has been great
I think this story is more about the characters than the main plot of IS and that is fine, FINALLY a story that explores its characters and does not focus only on a plot of which I am already tired (the plot of IS is fine but read it again and again you get tired)
I must say that so far this story has a lot of potential and I know that I have to say about how well built Galen's personality is, but that would take me much longer and I will probably do it later.
thanks for motivating you to write something like that, I think this story deserves much more recognition than it has
I speak Spanish, so what I have written happens to the Google translator, so if something is not understood, do not hesitate to ask

I would not call your updates consistent although they are better than the last years.
It also depends on how long you wanna run this show. You're at chapter 20 and this fic has been running for three years right now. Which is a good while.

I get Galen's whole idea about his ideas of dating Chifuyu. It is not really following all lines but on the long end of the run, those two have been through a lot and they use each other to unwind. I like that in their relationship. You keep it surely ambiguous although it is going to change soon if my hunch is right. With Ichika's comments, looks like he is right on the money with his guesses. Maybe he and Houki will do some stuff to avoid regret. They will look out on that.

As for the ending, I will fully admit I did not see that one coming. Looks like Galen in crude language is peddling up shit's creek. I wonder how that will go down.
It is not going to be pretty.
Saluut.

nice

Looks like Galen got some real issues to deal with. Although I am liking the idea of him and Chifuyu hitting off more and more. They just work out. You really worked on this and showed how much chemistry those two have when they hang out with each other.

They might rumors from their back. But the other girls got some screen time as well. They certainly got some work cut out for them.

Took you about three years to work on this fic and finish season 1. You end this fic when? In 2023? No joke. Serious question.
With summer around, writing is taking a slower pace but a steadier one. Things get busy for me. Drop by.
Saluut.

Its great to see another chapter out. Not much else to say except I love what youre roung and I'm looking forward to the next one.