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Navigator101 chapter 4 . 9/26/2019 I like the premise and I will probably continue this. Not sure, but Matthias would need to have been cursed a lot longer than 300 years ago. Especially if Norway was little. He and Denmark are more or less of an Age together. America is a baby compared to them. America would have been around 300 years ago, but he would have been England's baby colony, and Norway would have been an adult and raising Iceland. In fact Iceland was probably closer to America's age than Norway. He didn't gain Independence until 1918, so that probably affected his aging somewhat, but no way would Norway be a little tyke just learning about Magic 300 years ago. He was a Viking back with Denmark and Sweden. Just something to keep in mind when you're doing your flashbacks. In fact Denmark would probably believe in England's magic because when he was first growing up that sort of belief was a lot bigger. Even if he couldn't see the creatures. All just ideas to bear in mind. |
Guest chapter 14 . 5/25/2019 This story is AMAZING! 20/10! |
GreyLady1575 chapter 20 . 12/4/2016 Loved it! Thank you, both for the story and for sticking with it until the end! I believe I saw a few one-shot side stories for this. Definitely going to pop over to your profile and read them. :3 |
redstarsarc chapter 20 . 11/27/2016 This was wrapped up quite nicely. I like the character interactions, especially the teasing. It must be strange for Denmark now that the curse is broken, but a good strange :) Thanks for writing this story, it was entertaining to read. |
Mely-Val chapter 20 . 11/24/2016 You are awesome! Thank you! First, for being one of the rare writers who finish their fic, and second for posting regulary. I will do a fanart of this, i promise! And i will send you the link. Thankyou so much for considering my advices (im sorry my bad english, its not my first laguage XD). And i was wondering, in the other One-Shots (or more chapters), of this fic or others, there can be more dramatic parts, it will attract more readers perhaps? |
GreyLady1575 chapter 19 . 11/23/2016 Oh my, have I been commenting a lot? I better keep this short, lest you tire of me ;) So glad that you kept the fight on one chapter. It was long, but absolutely worth it. Thanks for your dedication to this chapter, I would imagine that fight scenes are beasts to write. Are there any new project that we might look forward to, after the completion of this story? Til next time :3 |
redstarsarc chapter 19 . 11/20/2016 What a well-written battle! I find that long fight sequences can be pretty challenging. There was some good imagery in there and I liked the final showdown between Denmark and Fenris. Also, usually when writing dialogue in a foreign language, I use google translate for the individual words and wikipedia/random other site for the grammar. It also helps to ask people on writing/research forums. But I don't know a single word of Romanian so...*shrug* Anyway, wow. The curse is finally over. Denmark must be pretty happy, huh? I wonder what he will do now. |
Mely-Val chapter 19 . 11/20/2016 THIS CHAPTER WAS AWESOOOOOOMEEE! i love it, i wasnt expecting such a fight! This was great. I will do a fanart of this, i promise!... and i was wondering, since it is such a good fanfic. Do you plan to write, one shots of this story, but in different times of the past? Like, one shots of Den struggle with the course in the past and how he needed to hide it from the rest, how bad and lonley he felt about it, or something?. If you want to, i was just wondering, thats all. |
Mely-Val chapter 18 . 11/13/2016 I really did enjoyed it! But take your time to make a good chapter. Your fic is awesome! And as i promised, i will do a fanart and send you a message with the deviantart link |
redstarsarc chapter 18 . 11/13/2016 Aww, Mathias and Lukas look so cute in my head right now. And it'll be interesting to see the whole magic trio together. I wonder what'll happen and hope they know what they're doing more than Lukas did that time. |
GreyLady1575 chapter 18 . 11/13/2016 LOVE the ears and tails! Just like puppies! Puppies that could totally lose it and rip you to shreds... I also loved the running joke regarding Mathias' use of "Rude". That is literally something that has happened between my sister and I, so it was really funny to read about. Finally, the idea of nation-hopping is great. In addition, the fact that the magical trio are the only ones with the knowledge/power to do it makes sense (to me anyway). Nice work! Definitely looking forward to your next update :) |
Mely-Val chapter 17 . 11/6/2016 Yes im very proud of you, and im going to make a fanart of this fic ;) ill show you when i post it in deviantart |
GreyLady1575 chapter 17 . 11/5/2016 It always makes me really happy when I see that this story has been updated! I am quite proud of you! Definitely loving the ideas and plot in play, great job :) |
redstarsarc chapter 17 . 11/5/2016 Wow. Tails. That's an appropriately humorous ending to an otherwise action-packed chapter. But I'm glad Lukas managed to gain control and stop Mathias before he could kill Emil. I would be sad if Icey died. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. |
redstarsarc chapter 16 . 11/3/2016 This is getting exciting. As I was reading it, I thought the imagery of Lukas turning into a half-werewolf would make an interesting - and creepy - piece of fanart. Anyway, looking forward to the final night. |