The word is lose you been spelling the word loose.

Pizza time!

Theres only five to a room per year. In this story you have six to a not misers.

Please use the word a in some of your sentences as you seem to forget that a is a letter as well as a word.

What happened to rules.

you do reallize that you have used emily' name in several locations where it should have been maria.

Honestly I don't see why you'd rewrite it. This fanfiction is truly amazing~ I wish you'd continue it.

Please mark this story as being rewritten.

This story needs an update.

great story, wish for more APWBD bashing, why oh why did you let him back?

Writing a good story is hard work. You are doing a good job - please continue.

I like this story. It still has some though spots though, I noticed you wrote Harry's name instead of Merlyn's a few times and having starting a new paragraph each time someone speaks would help with the readability. All in all I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Ur welcome hun. Love it as always and seriously can't wait for the next update

Well, this is a pretty good story. The summary was not that appealing at first, but seeing that it kept being updated I give it a chance.

I like how is being written and this oC's too. A nice family and their friend. I also like the pairings, and how everything is going, so kudos to the author. Pretty good.

Awesome chapter.