Hopefully, this gets an update soon, it was an interesting way to introduce Bolton with Daenerys.

Is the story abandoned?

Great story would love to see more

I'm a huge fan of the fanfic it's truly awesome.
I like that you're smuggling wildlings into the south but there are 20 thousand one of them dont you think people would notice they are wildlings.
I like the way you write your story on the pov of the MC but I recomand to write more dialouges between more characters to establish a good story.

I know you're skipping years to move forward to the plot but I think after the war starts you should take your time explainig what happens and writing the plot

How many chapters Do you write it would be great if you could write 2 chapters a week the the uploading would keep your spirits up because if you dont upload in a week a week turns to months and so on but I hope you dont drop this.

why didn't he use the gold to kill Baelish since Walder was free?

Interesting touch with the vices being his drinking and whoring. Very King Robert of him. I am curious as to how he plans to keep Ned Stark alive when he goes to the capital. I am glad that he's done good work for the Watch. I do think it sucks that he'd doing much for Dany but nothing to help Jon Snow other than the general improvements to the wall. I hope you write more on this story.

Poor Genghis, but love that he delivered a haymaker to Loras for the death of his horse. And Bran as a page is awesome. He always wanted to be a knight and this gives him a taste of that, not to mention seeing a tournament. I am curious as to why Dacey Mormont was in the south, but love that he gave the crown to a northern woman. Also, great that he is getting Gendry out of danger. Kind of cool to think of Bran and Myrcella, though Cersei would not approve and Bran may yet become the three eyed raven and not match with anyone.

Interesting. I had expected it to be Tywin Lannister that was taken out not Walder Frey, but he's a good choice as well. Highly doubt you'd really need a faceless man for him though.

Love the song. I'm sure Robert will like it as well. Well done for Domeric to have done as much as he did.

Interesting. And this is actually a very... good take on self-insert.

Never thought about Bolton as a good strategic choice.

A shame this was abandoned, though short, it had some promise

some many predators - so many predators

Sad that it was left abandoned after so few chapters, perhaps planning out the story a bit more as well as using a writer's site such as Sufficient Velocity for feedback might help with your motivation to write.

It was an awful event true, but you shouldn't change your story because of happenings in RL. And here years later there's even less reason for it.

fair better - fare better

the Tully's - the Tullys