This was fantastic! I love the depth you just added to Piper's character here! And I didn't even connect those dots that each of them is afraid of their own "realm." Wonderful writing and wonderful story!

This is amazing! I love the tenderness! Great job!

I love this—it’s well written, great grammar, wonderful plot!
Only one thing, though: is this story in past-tense or present-tense? It kind of changes throughout the story.

This is really good. Perfect, or as close as one can get.

that is beautiful,

Oh my goodness, this was amazing! It was really well written.

I loved this! Great writing.

THIS SCENE SHOULDVE HAPPENED IN THE BLOOD OF OLYMPUS!
In the book we never really got an answer or solution to percys mental condition. But if this was part of the book then if would have helped a lot. Im a big fan of the friendship between percy and piper and you nailed it in this fic. Pipers dialogue was just perfect :)

You have filled a void. Pretty please keep writing! You characterize our beloved characters so well. And wrote a scene I've been looking for someone to write for years. Spectacularly, I might add. Keep it up!

so cute! I love percy/piper friendship stories there are never enough on this site. they just have such a good brother/sister relationship and it's so nice! Love it!

I wasn't expecting much, but you did a really good job with that. It wasn't rushed or anything. It's clean, concise, well-developed, and well written. Thanks. :)

Yaaass. Percy and Piper is a good brotp. And you can never go wrong with some well-written Angst.