omg. this is lit

Nice chapter

So glad that you have updated this story and I can't wait for the next update I also can't wait for the update on Love

Awesome update!

I a super excited that you are writing and updating but it makes me a little skeptical about all the stories that were so amazing that you just up and abandoned, I hope this one continues and that you possibly work on some of our old favorites-thanks

I love it so far please continue!'

I can't wait until they fall in love because right now that can't tolerate each other...more please, l absolutely adore it!

This update was great I'm so glad you are back. I really can't wait to see where you go with this I am pumped

Awesome update!

Great start. Can't wait for more

Awe

The concept is nice, but the arranged marriage part needs work.
Also, get a beta to help you.
And make sure you break everything up with a lot of dialogue, since you've already set up the sequence of events.
And try not to be predictable.
Good luck!

Beautifully heart wrenching!

YESSSSS! This is going to be amazing I really hope you update soon. I love the concept of this it's really original

Awesome start!