Wow, this was the best tf fic I've read. And I've read a lot of them.
Wonderful character development, spot on descriptions. You don't tell a story, you show it. That's not easy to do, so indeed a very well done. Hoping to see more from you in the future!

Yay! This story was awesome! I'm curious to see how Mal would react various situations, so I'll be following closely :D

OH man, amazing ending. I am looking forward to future stories (Prequel/sequel). I am glad that I found this story. Good grammar, drama, cliffhangers, emotions, etc. even if there were a few mistakes here and there.

My favorite parts of this chapter was when Mal was freaking out when (the) RED Engie came in to assure it/him(?) and when the Scouts were asking the Scoutbot how they drank Bonk! (even if there was no dialogue).

My favorite parts out of this whole story had to be the beginning when Mal/Scoutbot first appeared, that "You can only push so far" oneshot (the almost-fight), Engineer getting mad (Multiple occasions), Mal having that one breakdown after getting their memories back, Pyro being overall cute and deadly at the same time, Mal over excited about getting a name, Mal swearing like a sailor, and maybe when GRAY MANN DIED, MUAHAHAH.

:-D :-D _

I usually don't read a lot of Fanfictions, but since it seems interesting begin to read this one and I'm not going to lie, I was expecting a shitshow. But I was pleasantly surprised

With the right assets you can become a professional writer I don't say that's a lot of people so you can make thought of what you will from what I just said. Either way good luck in the future and thanks for writing this

JUST READ THE CHAPTER. I COMPLETELY FORGIVE YOU NOW c:
Gray Mann is finally going to die! mUAHAHAHHA! Was so good, I read the chapter to my friend who has no knowledge of the story and its origin (except for some short descriptions from me) who is currently sleeping over at my house.
Even if Mal was is a dazed state for some time, when checking the cameras, convenient timing is convenient. I feel evil for liking this chapter, but it's a good evil feeling. Like every chapter, this was amazing. With only one chapter left, I feel like you fit those time stamps perfectly; not to long, not too short.
I like that one line: "Gray cut himself off with a scream; he'd tried to reach for him gun with his free hand, but Mal hand slammed his fist down on it, the durable metal easily shattering the frail bones beneath it". Breaking (a) bone(s) is not fun. I broke my toe after a brick fell while I was climbing over a wall to retrieve a ball. Hurt since I didn't know it was broken and I proceeded to try and walk on it.
Although I think I know what is going to happen, what if the scattergun wasn't loaded? Would Mal have to smash in his head? I do hope that Mal ends Gray Mann's life either way. The mercenaries will then probably forgive him. Is Mal going to give off a victory screech? I also hope that happens. xD
Anxious to find out what happens in the next chapter.

bueno eso fue cruel "gracias" :-(

Good point about the suit. I'm curious as to how this part of the story will conclude.

YOU KILLED HIM. YOU MONSTER. I KNOW YOU TOLD ME IT WAS GOING TO BE BAD, BUT I FEEL LIKE THE TIME I FIRST WATCHED THE GAMEPLAY OF THE WALKING DEAD GAME AND TOTALLY LOST MY MIND AT THE END OF SEASON TWO. NOW I HAVE TO RE READ THIS OVER AND OVER SO I CAN GET OVER THIS HEARTACHE. I TALKED TO YOU ABOUT MY DINOSAURS AND CHARACTERS. I FEEL SO BETRAYED ;-;-;-;-;-;-;. And i am even making that Glass Majugasaurus for you. Cri. I don't KNOE HOW TO FEEL RIGHT NOW. I can't decide if I show hate you for this chapter or appreciate that you have upadted. I WANT TO KILL YOU BUT I FEEL SO CONFILCTED BECAUSE I LIKED AND HATED THIS CHAPTER.

I silently hope that Egineer would come back but considdering that there are only 2 chapters left, that is unlikley. Since I watched some of the movie :Ghost in a shell where a human brain is placed into a robot, I now wish that Engineers brain is placed into a Mecha Engineer. Though that is unlikley, it will forever remain an idea and alternate universe in my mind.
I must go on with this rant.
BOOOOOOIIII (hold on, when I typed "Boi" the word "Hillbillies" came up in the word bar XD). This is so sad, Jason will be outraged. He likes to rant and talk if you give him the chance to. Time to start a " Bring Back Engineer" cult.

If you could add spaghetti in this story somehow (in any way) I will love you forever (no homo). Waiting for those last two chapters is going to be hard. Can't wait for you to finish

Alright, both Pyros dead, the engineer unconscious and Mal subdued. This seems to be a corner you've wrote them into, I'd love to see you get them out of it.

Well, a birthday gift came early. I was hoping for it to be posted on Monday, but this is better! Pyro has to at least address themselves before they suddenly pop out of no where. Speaking of Pyro, I just finished a picture of Pyro as the small dromaeosaur: Pyroraptor. It will be posted on my tumblr. Anyways, now they are no where near to getting close to Gray Mann. I think there is a good chance that Gray Mann will change locations or the other mercs will get to Gray Mann, only to find Engie, Pyro, and Mal held hostage. Other than that, that sounds like alot of classes and stuff you have to do. The suspense is real for me. See you in the next chapter.

:-D

Personally, I hope it's Mal who deals the killing blow to Gray Mann.

OH MAN OH MAN OH MAN. MY CONSTANT RELOADING OF THE PAGE EVERY 7 HOURS WAS NOT IN VAIN. Anyways wow. This chapter is certainly something, and yay, over 100 reviews now. Poor Mal, he was just trying to help and all he got was being called a traitor and death threats. I can somehow feel the fear coming out of Mal as I read this chapter. I really felt like Mal was going to be destroyed. he was close to being destroyed though. Now Engineer and Mal are on the run from both robots and mercenaries. I wonder what is going to happen. I think Engineer will either lash out at Mal or join him in getting out of Gray Mann's base. I feel like Engineer is going to stay with Mal in my personal opinion. Other than that, cri, R.I.P. Bobby. GG no re. Hope to read the next chapter soon!