will you be continuing this story it's getting good.

Imma just ignore this chapter and call it a one shot. Good fic.

Really?! You decide to procrastinate on a cliffhanger?

OH HOLY SHIT

Is this like, something where time resets at the end of a certain period, and he gets to relive it over and over until he gets it right?

That's awesome!

Looks like the issues have finally worked themselves out then. Congrats and welcome back! And if you ever need help bouncing ideas off of someone for the fic, just shoot me an pm or message me on tumblr.

Probably could leave the same review I left on Ao3, but lets make this different. This is a very interesting concept that you are writing here. Having one character basically being omniscient about what happens in the future, while the other knows all the intricacies of the case. And I have to wonder why originally Judy didn't share her information with Nick, when they are such good, and close, partners.

Yay, an update. I was worried that this had been dropped. I am wondering if this will follow the anime' plot because in the show, the main character was way too emotional and made a ton of very stupid decisions. Plus I never finished it so the ending of this fic will be a surprise.

DONT SAY EVERYTHING SUCKS I LOVE YOUR POWERLESS GUARDIAN AND FORGETFUL GUARDIAN STORIES AS I ALSO HOPE YOU'LL FINISH THE FORGETFUL GUARDIAN.

I do like how you matured in your writing and i am glad you have returned, but don't put down your work. I've followed both stories from the very begining and still are following them and they are my top favs on this sight that i don't think another story has reached. I still reread the stories, wondering if I should try and get someone to continue Forgetful Guardian. I loved the movie it and it's prequel are based on but how you written your ocs made it seem so natural and so much more enjoyable story that I wished they included them or made your version into a comic THAT I WOULD TOTALLY BUY!

But again I am so so soooo happy that you're back on the site and that you're making another story that I am definitely gonna follow. So keep up the good work, and I know you'll do great!

woahhhh your narration has matured so much it's so beautiful im so proud ;-;;;

(side note: FUCK YEA FOR ERASED GOOD THING YOU ACTUALLY FINISHED WATCHING IT .
mygod your a/n burns my eyes jkjk it's very you dont change it i love it
welcome back to the fanfic writing scene that was a great intro and it makes me excited for more! also why did that juices overflowing part sound kinda dirty what have you done you guys have corrupted me)

At first I was in a sleep position, then sitting, then standing. Seriously this is very good. Well written. Hope Nick finds this culprit soon, the guy has to pay

how are u going to make her after confirming death and burying her

Thank GOD that you let us know Judy isn't going to stay dead. That was depressing on a WHOLE different kind of level.

On another note, I'm super intrigued! Favoriting for later.

please, do MORE!

Woah, this is some intense stuff. Thank you for letting me know that Judy wouldn't stay dead and letting up on my feels a little because, holy shit, if Nick's last word to her was "ok", over a text message no less, that would bring depressing to a whole new level.

Now you've got me curious about this anime. I might have to check it out, just to have an idea of what's going on here (read: spoil myself silly).

Hey, good to see you back in action. I'm also kind of making my own comeback, after over 2 years of inactivity. Anyway, wow. I know that Zootopia was more amazing and intense than anyone could possibly give it credit for but damn. Seriously this is good, I read the full first chapter in one sitting-er-laying, and I was at the edge of my seat, I mean my bed, while reading it. Seriously, great job! I hope Nick does catch the perpetrator soon enough! Update soon! ;)

Okay so just read the first chapter and I gotta say that was quite a read, it was well written and the emotions of the characters were well detailed so you could put yourself in their positions, you could feel Judy’s determination but also the amount of stress she had to be going through, and Nick’s concern and later heart break and anger from what happened to Judy. After seeing your note at the bottom of the chapter it would’ve been nice to see the story continue with Nick actually going out and capturing the criminal trying to not have his partners death go in vain all while trying to come to terms with the fact that she’s gone and not try to find this person for the sake of revenge, at the same time though after reading your note I think you have the potential and material you’re working off of to make this one hell of a fanfic to read. I look forward to the continuation of this and wish you all the best with writing this, stay awesome! (and yes I am the same person from Tumblr who just wrote this exact same thing there with the reblog :') )