Reviews for Control |
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clay chapter 1 . 5/24/2018 AHHHHHHHHHHH i love it |
HaaClay chapter 1 . 5/24/2018 AHH i love this make more PLEASE |
Chrisblue1030 chapter 1 . 10/27/2017 Good story! I really liked the interaction between Sean and Anti. Interesting to see Anti be thoughtful about anything, but it's possible. This could be a series of short stories about Sean and Anti's adventures, sharing the same body. Awesome! Keep up the great writing. |
311y4M3 chapter 1 . 9/20/2017 Wonderfully made! I hope more comes out soon! |
Random Person chapter 1 . 8/4/2017 I got hyper while watching this. |
Angel-Wing-Lowlang chapter 1 . 11/15/2016 Wow, very cool! I don't think either of them have control, but if I would have to guess, I would say that Anti is stronger. Its a very good concept and well written:) Good job! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2016 Wow this was awesome! I'd love to see a follow up if you would. You're a great writer |
TooLazyToLogIn chapter 1 . 11/1/2016 I would love to see a follow up on this, I think it's a shame to end it this early. I really enjoyed reading this and it gave me a couple of ideas for the flow of some of the fanfics I am trying to get around to writing. So thank you for that, and thank you for writing this amazing fic. Stay awesome, and keep them fanfics coming C: |
Dgnman 2455 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016 T̫̼̹̩͖̰̜̰̋͂̆̿̿ͪ̃́̚ȟ̊ͨ̅ͣ̇̈͂̐̃̚͏̸̷̴̣͔̭̹̙͡i͕̘͍̘̖̭͈̝͍̙̳̰͉̪̒̈̒̓͋̃͋̇ͩ̒́ͨ͐̓͒̓͑́n̢̨̡̟̩̭̥̰̫̹̯̼̯̹̣ͬͦ̈́͐̑ͫ̃͢͠ģ̡͆̾̅̓̅̿̏͑ͥ͊̈͋́̕͏̣̳̖̙̤̙͎̝̬̤͍͔̣ͅs̯̤͈̪̯̦͍͖̻͖̟̲̰͉̮̞̀͆ͬ͆̔̋̊̽̈́ͤ̑̉̀̈́ͨ̍͂̏̏̕͠͞ ̵̙̰̠̝̅͐̂̄͐̅́͟͠ẉ̴͎̜̳̤̙̹̙͐ͯ̿͋͊ͫ̀͢i͈̹̬͕̯̹̞͓̥ͪ̾̿ͣ̎ͣ̃̉̀͒͋̍ͪ́͝l̢̼͉̣̻͈̬͒͊̿̾ͩ̎̓͆͂ͥ̅̀ͭ̅̉ͫ̾͝ͅl̨̬̲̼̹̪̼̖̥̞̥̠̼͖̗̭͎̒͊̈ͯ̀̕͝ͅ ̧̧̰̣͓̹̮̖̠̜̫̣͇̪ͯ͋ͯͫ͗̾ͪͪ̋͠n͖̱͕̖̻̳̭ͣ̂̌̒̏͂ͮͬͪͥ͂ͪ̉͌́̕͟͝͠e̶̛̤̙̰͎̮̩̬̣̳̳̯̹̝̹̳̖̥̱̊ͦͥͧͦ͆̽͆ͫͣ̍̂̅͋̍̂̿v̛͕̱̖̪͓̬̬̹̠̙̰̟͓̠̤͔̫͈̓̎̈́ͥͪ̅ͮͯͮͨ̒̎̿̿̇̈́͑͑͠e̢͍̝̼̣͉̼͍̖͈̟̻̲͓̼̝̞̭̔͗̽ͫ̇́́͝͝r̹̲̹̯̻̣̻͔̗̯̥̄ͩͬ̂̆ͫ̑̊̍̄̑̈ͫ͢͠͝ͅ ̴̸̨͇̩̪͇̣̞͍͔̬̝̼̦͎ͣ̏ͮ̎̋̐̅̀͆̀͞b̨̧̧̛̝̯̫̘̱͎͔͎̣͓̜̄̒́̌͌̊̈́͆ͯ̓ͧ̆ͪ̅e̝͇͉̤͇̰͕̠̞̦̦̣͓̋͗̐́̏̚̚͞ ̸̶̢̼̜̝̹͉̘̖̩̂ͯ̌͗͟͟ͅt̵̫̼̯̩̼̳̜̳̥̭̤͈ͧ̒̽̈ͯ̒͑͊̆ͪ̾͑̀̚ḫ̢̜̬̱̟͔͔̫͍̖̪ͪ̿̈́͆̒ͨ͞͡ͅḛ̷̡͉̥͈̝̳͉̪͍ͤͣ͗ͩ̾͒ͫͦ͐ͫ̑̇́ ̨̢̼͎̪̝͍̯̖̐͆ͮ͒̽ͫͮ̽͌̓̄̈̆ͯ͗s͗͐̃ͮ̇̎ͣ̋ͬ͆ͦ̈́̀ͩ̑͏̧̬̟̙̱̰̯̮͉͡ͅa̵̴̟͇͖̦̘ͭͫ̌ͦ̾̐̑ͫ̍͌ͮ̔ͣͩ̚̚ṃ̵̨̖̗͔̯̭̪̩̥͔̮̘ͨ̓̔͒ͧ̀̚è̡ͬ̈̓̀͢͏̥̘͍̥̮̭̮̫͠.̡̢͈̦̯̩͉̤̦̫ͯ͌ͬ̊͟͟͞.̷̨͔̝̟̯͕̗̌̏͗̾͐́̀͢ͅ.̶̸̡͓̱̤̹̱̥̮͕̼̬̳̙̘̗͇̙̫̤̇̅͑̆̔̑̍̓́̀ͅ ̴̧̮͓̲͎̠̤̲͕͈̲̻̞͎̹̰̲̱ͣ̂̈́ͯ͊̏̅̃ͫ̕͠ ̴̞̠̥̟̫̰̔̅̄̓ͭ̎̒ͣ̽͗̅͆̕͡͡͡H̦̤̪͍̘͖͉̞̱͕̠͇̯̻̗̪ͩ͑̽ͯ̈̏̄̉̿̿̅̋ͫͬ̿̀̕͟ͅe̷̴̸̳̟͉̜̜͕͌ͤͯͦ̑̈́͋́̒̉ͩ͊̚̚͞ ̹̙̘̯̪̮̥̼͔̊̐̐̊ͬ̐̃̉̔͒ͨ͂̋͌ͫͭ͡ͅw̵̜͍͎̗̬͈̲͂̉͐̽̾͑̀ͤ̃̀̍ͭͮ͑͑̕͢͝ͅi̶̞͎̯͖̹̣͓͖̦͓̯̘̥̣̎̐̓̈ͣ̄̐̔̋̏̊̈ͫ̓̚̚͠͠ͅl̸̨̯̠͉͎͇̖͇̠̳̮̦̋͐̉ͥ͋͐͌̍̑͂̔̑̾̉ͥ͗ͅl̨̢̼̯̳̹̲͕̬̦̹̩̜̼̯̽̓̍ͣͭ̽̂̍͂̽̔̃͌ͧ́̚͠ ̴̨̫͈̪̫̜̝͎͕͍͔̭̙̻̟̯̉͆ͯ̎͆̋͋͊͑̋͆͟͠ͅcͭ͊ͤ̊̌͡͏͏̧̗̬̦̱͕o̴̵͍̬̳̣̰͉̱̘̗̻̰̰̳̟̰͈̫͓̐̋̒ͬ̓̔̆̌͑̋̄̔̈́ͮṃ̸̨̨̻̗͖̪̜̲̩̣̮̠ͪͨ̐ͤ͗̉̋͠e̡̻̖̲̘̩̝̮̔̽͆̽ͤͧ̀.̴͋̐͂͏̷̢̟̜͓̬̖͞.̶̴̢̣̳͔̭̣́ͮ͗ͪ̄͒̃͐͗̂̑̔̑̒̓̌́.͖͕͔͖ͣ̆ͥ̂̓̿̊̌́̚ ̧̨̡̜̪̹̣̙̖̘̭̥͇̫̘̄̇̓͑̈́̉͟͢ͅ ̶̛̈́̈́̃̓̿̂ͭ͟͏̙̯̹̼̱̩̪̣͍̝̣͈̹̜̻A̷̷̟͓͕͉̥̰̖̟͇̘̳͍̖͉̯̰̍̉̆́̓̕͡ͅn̶̡̖̮͉̭̘̲̤̙̦̫͇͎̮̖̗͈̏͌̋̅ͥͯͥ̆̉̍̈͌̊͗̋d̵̖͉̤̼̻͇̥̫̜̣̱͔̣͈̜͇̪͈̄͐ͦ̎̃̐̊̈ͬ̆́̓̽̃ͥ̅̇̇͝ ̶̶̨͇̲͉̮̼̠̫͉̮̹̩̱̳̰̯̞̯̼̽̾̓͋͒̌ͦ̔ͣ̐ͧ̈́ͮͯͯ͌̾ͬ͠s̶̢̛͇͈̩̳͈̪̝ͩ̍̿̃ͧͪ͑ͧͪͪe̛͇̞̯͓̤͍̩̞ͬ́̎̾͒͐̒ͪ̒ͦ͗̾ͤ͟n̢̯̰̩̲͍̯̬̘̙̬͖̪͇̪̜͓̥̬ͯ͂͗͑͊̄̉ͦ̇́d̴̵̲͓̮̥̎͂̾ͦ̂̓̃ͣ̎͐ͪ̌͠͞͝ ̸̞̠̖̖ͨ̊ͨͤͨ̍̏̇̂ͫ̄͌ͣ̋̀ͅṳ̮̼̪̗̼ͥ̓̓̈̄͐̆̕͝͞s̸̵̷͇̩̭̣̞̮̏̈ͮ̏̓̔̓́̐͞ͅ ̸̢̱͍̩̹͍͓̣̝̖̫̥̦̥͔͓̠̰̂͒ͫͧ̑̐̅ͤ̀̕ͅt̶̸̩͔̦͈̲̮ͫ̈̉͌̎̾̄ͨͪͣͪ̈ơ̛̩̰͉̠͎͎̹̲̘̤͉̯͇̝͐̿̀͌̄̔ͣ̃ͦ̆ͫ̐ͯ̓͒ͨ͡ ̶̢̛̖̼̖̫̙̳͇͈͔̣̱̬̏ͮ̀͋̔ͯ̐̾ͤ̃ͧ̓̅ͬ̾ͤͪ̕͝t̷̴̮̪̱̮̥̹͔̠̱͕̤͂ͪ̎̒̉̅́̈́̓h̨̫̟̰̘͔͈ͩ̃̒́̆̄́̀͟͠e̢̧͓͇̯̪͔̭̤̠̗̮̰̰̹̳̫͕̲̲͆̊͗ͦ ̢̤̲̤͉͍͖̥͉͖̮̙̥̐̑̇̇t̶̸̻̮̗͐͐ͯͯ͆͑ͮͭ̑ͩͧͫͪ̂̏ͧͅe̸̯̫̞̖̻̠̱̖̣̲̫̝̪̳ͫ̇̈́ͯͫͫͯ͋̚͢ņ̵̣̬͕̮̹̖͎̖̠͉̝̜̖͎̯̜̬̆ͩ̏̃̂̔ͯͅt̶̛͕̙̪̬̣̘̭̗̐͂̃ͤ͊͒̂̂ͧ̔ͮ̕͝ͅh̵̡̦̟͍̣̣͕̮̭̭̤̰̹͍̹̝̍ͮ̎̅̒͋ ̴̴̪̦̦̝͔̰̱͇͈͈̭͈͇̊ͬ̄̽ͥ̇̅̔̈ͩ̀ͩ̾ͭͯ̔̌͋̍c̢̢̯̘̗̘̮͔͔̜͎͕̰ͪ͆̉ͣͩͤ͑ͤ͊ͣ̐́͟͡ỉ̸̲̹̪̫̭̭͖͕͇͈͉̖͉͔̭ͩͩͨ̏̇ͯ̚̕͞͝ͅr̴̛̦̼̫͇̭̬̫̱̫̦̞̰̪̞͕̭̳͈ͬ̈͊ͣ͗̓͌ͧ̍́͗̍̔ͬ̍̀ͦ́ç̴̷̥͕̩̻̥͉͓̲̹̗̱̫̘̬͇͇̜̞͂ͫ̋ͭͧͬͧͪͨ̔ͪͬ̚͢͠ͅľ̨͉̠̩̘͇̙̭͈̼͔̮̬̤̳̖͖͖͗̃͐̏ͪͩ̇̍̄ͩ̽ͭ̍͐̒̒̕e̷͈͎͈̗̖̖͍̥͖̫͉ͪ̄̅ͣ͌͌ͣ̂̔ͩ̒́͌͐̄ͮ́ ̸̡̭̱̯͇̼̱͉̥̭̙̬̱̙͎̼̻̍̈̀ͬͧ͋ͥ̆̿̀͢͞ͅơ̧̛͎̖̟̬̹̖͉̳̹͖͇͈͈̠̠̥̿̋̑̂̐̑̾̀ͤ̓ͥ̆ͯ̚̚ͅf̷̯̳̗̟͔̥̳̟̻̟̝̗͎̹̹̠̹̿̾ͫ͑̔̈ͦͮͧ̒̀ͪͤ̐̅̃ͩ͝ ̸̨͉̘͇̱̣͈̬̤̙̝̪̐̄ͭͪ̉̈ͨ͗̃̀ͬ͂̿̕͝ͅh̢ͩ̃ͤͪ̏ͩ̓́̆̅̉̋̅͏͉̩̩͈̦̬̳͍͢e͆͑ͧ̈́̃ͥ̾̅̍́̀̽ͧͫ͌̆ͩ̂͏̡̜̤̫̞̱̹̬̦͞͝ļ̣̟͕͍̖̟͎̲̻̼͇̜̼̖̘̪̃̉ͩ̍͋̌͢l̷̡͔͎͉̤̣̬̬̘̩̜͍̜͉̣̗̬̤̣͇ͭ͗̎ͬ͒̇ͭ́͡.̷̢̖̰̲̘͇̰̟͓̠̪̘̾̉̾ͥ̀͟.̸̠̪̱̩̱̰̝͖̩̻̬͔̗͍̥͓̣̬̓̈́̾̀ͪ̃̊ͤ̔ͪ́ͮ̍͒͊ͩ̏̄͢͠͠.̸̠̥̝̖̿́́͆͂̂̇̏̅̃ͩͬ͒ͥͦ̏͆͢͞ |
SuperWolf1967 chapter 1 . 10/25/2016 Beautiful! |
GemGirl164 chapter 1 . 10/15/2016 Awesome. No other words. Just awesome. |
Themusicfanatic chapter 1 . 8/21/2016 Squueee! I love it! awesome job! |
PlaidOtaku chapter 1 . 6/30/2016 this was pretty cool |
Amypilierfan123 chapter 1 . 6/7/2016 ooh good one :) |