I can see why freed is always going on and on about shitty devils

:)

Fantastic chapter, Again the only thing that seems off is that sometimes, Romy and Adri act like 9 year olds and sometimes they seem way to mature for their age. COOL STORY BRO

VERY SOLID Chapter,
The only thing that seems off is that these kids are 9 years old. They feel like 13-16 year olds. And their strength is already on par with some adult devils. That seems a little off and I would have made a sort of "time lapse" a few chapters ago to make their age more realistic. The beginnings of the relationship between Rommy and Adri are very believable for like 11 year olds, so it seems a little off. I realize that I may be nit-picking and I cannot stress enough how much I am enjoying the hell out of this. Thanks 4 writing this and keep it up. Also stay safe.

Like the story bro, VERY well written.

Doesn't each devil have 1 chess set of evil pieces? I really like your take on Dxd So far. This is a very engaging opening chapter.

Would have been real funny if Mephisto and Tannin blasted the wraiths or the lich. Also felt like Cynthia would have been a better character for the familiars Guild.

The lich has to be someone from her past since it implied that is when it first encountered her.

I am delighted to read your story till now. An excellent plot which is getting densed. But I am really looking forward to it. Though what I am interested to see is how you add peerage members. You will dedicate one or two chapters in how he added them or just a long timeskip with flashbacks on how he gained them. Having said that an advice with the value of a salt, to be fair try not to gain a very large peerage with 15 members try them to be below two digits if possible 1Q 2K 2B 2R 2P(MAX 4). It will be nice and plot will get simple enough to write along with plot developments for all the characters unlike the main stream novels where Issei getting a large harem became hard to give plot development to a lot of his early girls making it seem bad and gained a lot of hatred from the fans...

Along with a it just like a normal fanfiction fan hoping for a very fast updates in the time of quarantine

I just wonder if Romulus will ever hit like a plateau of power development. Sure, he'll get more powerfull and experienced with time, but at some moment he will run out of options to "formally" increment suddenly his powers. He is a better fighter than most of his age, but that's because of the advance training he has with many teachers to unlock early most of his powers. That means he will get to a point where those new options are off the table and, besides combining his three powers, nothing new can add to his posibilities.

That's just me rambling, though. Airi's scene at the ned was hillarious, and dialogues are pretty well made considering they are 10-year-olds. Guess I miss seeing the Maous' actions at sending Seekvaira to Mephisto's academy and she going back to the Underworld, or any of the other things related to the state of the world, but for one chapter is nothing to worry about.

Great chap. You wrote just enough about the different chakras to not over explain, in my opinion that is.
Since this is one of the few good stories on this site, I hope you can post more chapters soon.

Well, personally U felt the chapter a bit repetitive and boring. Just unlocking the chakras isn't my cup of tea, ya know?

Though the rythm was good enough for the chapter, and the time between updates is hort again. Can't say I'm ungratefull.

Either way, see ya.
RedSS.

Continue the second arc here, why post as a separate story?

Keep the story in this one. If you put the new arc in another story it will be a hassle and a pin in the ass to follow, besides searating them unnecesarilly. Just keep it in this one.

Regarding the chapter and plans... well, they're nlt bad, but too much training could also become boring to read, specially if said training is always the same routine repeating itself and not doing anything important of instant-like effect.

Those are my thoughts, though, so pick them up with a grain of salt.

Well, see ya,
RedSS.

Issei bashing?
sometimes I wonder if the authors don't insert a character only to pass their personal frustrations towards Issei.
because just to reading you, I feel like it is.

why are the authors unable to write a story properly without degrading Issei's personality?

why bashing Issei when you don't have to introduce him?
bashing is just to degrade and humiliate a character like Issei. that does not contribute anything scriptually.
bashing stories are the worst imo.