A- book

It made sense good plot and grammar.
Bit much of sex.
And honestly not long enough.

You probably don't even see these, but in the case you do.

Good job

Of course his strength is 420

I swear when Gasper comes out and we don't turn him into a small Dio I will be disappointed

screw the lemons and stuff

I got a hard on from the Mana factory and I'm proud!

First chapter and we're already into our mother...this is a DXD story

nice story too bad ur probably dead

Damn bro! Completely love your story! Please update soon though! Can't wait for the next chapter! And I have to ask. Since he absorbs the lifeforce of people would he gain their sacred gears? Lol! Use human path on vali! The power of boosted gear and divine dividing used by one person! It would be fucking awesome! He really should absorb the longinus's of the hero faction. Imagine what he could do with all of them?! He would definitely become one of the most powerful beings in the universe! Please update soon! This story is really getting into some good parts!

You know issei should have given kiba the life of gilgamesh too. Would have helped with the range stuff as well. Imagine kiba using Ea. Lol! That would be the stuff of nightmares. Unlimited blade works connected to the gates of Babylon. OMG! THAT WOULD BE AWESOME! WHY DID YOU NOT DO THAT!? Please add that.

Hmm... doesn't he have an immunity to fire because of his dragon skin? And why didnt he turn his heart into a dragon's? It would have probably increased his vitality and stamina and strength! You know, with dragon blood going through his veins and stuff. Gotta be more potent that human blood. He really should have done that. Maybe even all his organs! Except maybe his brain. Don't know how that would affect him. With different chemicals and instincts and inhibitions and stuff. Meh... would it matter with his gamer's mind? Shit he could have turned his entire body into that of a dragon! That's what great red did in canon to him and it didn't adversely affect him that much! C'mon! Turn him into a dragon completely would you!

Have the thugs ever heard of guns...? What are they cave men from the stone age?

One of the best stories I have ever read can you please continue this.

This is really good keep it going

“Before the end of April” April 3, 2017.
Me, 3 years later: “Welp.”

Next chapter in april.

Actually Dissapears for 3 years like a chad

This has been quite entertaining to read. It's almost too entertaining as for the passed 8 hours I haven't done anything but read DxD: Gamer.